A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
The proposition recommends that a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. I almost agree with the recommendation.
Implementing this system will ensure that until the student enters the college and make the choice of its career path he/she will have the same amount of opportunities as his/her fellows. This will also help reduce inequality at the basic level induced by the economic condition of the parents and the type of school he/she attends. Though all students might not have the same level of intelligence, they will be exposed to the same curriculum, so the students with lower abilities will also be able to get the basic knowledge of every field and then decide about their career path thoughtfully. This will also help colleges to standardize their admission process and evaluate the capability of the students. If we want to compare the properties of the two materials, then we will have to test them using the same procedure. Similar is the case with the students and the curriculum. The entrance exams of universities follow a curriculum, and if all the students have not studied through the same curriculum, then it will be highly unfair for some students and they might lose opportunities because of that. Then on the later stage, when the student chooses his/her career path with proper thinking, he can choose to take/drop specific subjects according to his requirements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 19.5258426966 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 58.6224719101 51% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 2235.4752809 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 241.0 442.535393258 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06639004149 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77928396271 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 215.323595506 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551867219917 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 704.065955056 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.713316763 60.3974514979 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.1 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 5.21951772744 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.97078651685 40% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20240560854 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944785513012 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133224327408 0.0758088955206 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259627830877 0.150359130593 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133550182254 0.0667264976115 200% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 100.480337079 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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