Nation should suspend government funding for the arts when significant numbers of their citizens are hungry or unemployed
Government's goal should be to increase the overall growth of the nation.For this government should take care of every factor.The government provides funding for the better growth and for the help to achieve their goals, but if some parts of the nation are suffering from worst conditions, then the government should also take note of this and reduce or stop funding for some factors. I agree with the author's claim that government should stop funding for arts when significant numbers of their citizens are hungry or unemployed.
If significant numbers of citizens are hungry or unemployed then the government should provide funding for them to live a better life. Country's growth depends on the growth of every citizen. It should not be like provide funding for the arts and other parts of a country are suffering from hunger or unemployment. Every citizen of a country should have equal opportunity and chances to make a life better. If the citizens are suffering from basic needs government should first provide funding for it.It is not the case that if you will stop funding for the arts then it will dimish in few years.
The government should stop funding for arts and should provide funding for the basic needs of country's citizens. If significant numbers of citizens are suffering from hunger or unemployment than it is a major problem of a country and to increase overall growth the government must solve the problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e parts of the nation are suffering from worst conditions, then the government sh...
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...r citizens are hungry or unemployed. If significant numbers of citizens are h...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'then']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.270916334661 0.240241500013 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.147410358566 0.157235817809 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0836653386454 0.0880659088768 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0278884462151 0.0497285424764 56% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0318725099602 0.0444667217837 72% => OK
Prepositions: 0.151394422311 0.12292977631 123% => OK
Participles: 0.0159362549801 0.0406280797675 39% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.59652211301 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0199203187251 0.030933414821 64% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.119521912351 0.0997080785238 120% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0517928286853 0.0249443105267 208% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.00398406374502 0.0148568991511 27% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1450.0 2732.02544248 53% => OK
No of words: 240.0 452.878318584 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.04166666667 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.58838876751 86% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.379166666667 0.366273622748 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.270833333333 0.280924506359 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.154166666667 0.200843997647 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.104166666667 0.132149295362 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59652211301 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 219.290929204 46% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.420833333333 0.48968727796 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 37.3778981055 55.4138127331 67% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6194690265 44% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 26.6666666667 23.380412469 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.5882013411 59.4972553346 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.111111111 141.124799967 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 23.380412469 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.674092028746 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.94800884956 61% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.21349557522 173% => OK
Readability: 53.75 51.4728631049 104% => OK
Elegance: 2.11538461538 1.64882698954 128% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.578903885134 0.391690518653 148% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.191343445196 0.123202303941 155% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.163307608557 0.077325440228 211% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.622998513236 0.547984918172 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.181494329009 0.149214159877 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.319296660404 0.161403998019 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.185692231868 0.0892212321368 208% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.628368566442 0.385218514788 163% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0416532959429 0.0692045440612 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.481843838495 0.275328986314 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770916274104 0.0653680567796 118% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.4325221239 38% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 7.22455752212 42% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.66592920354 136% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 8.0 13.5995575221 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 41.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.5 Out of 6
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