None of us can deny the effect of luck in our life. When he was young, just graduated, after three years working for a Japanese firm, Tony was fired because of a restructured company, closing that business model around the world. Becoming unemployed for a

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 381, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...he ground. Feeling always upset because cant earn money, have nothing new to be able...
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Line 1, column 462, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...ble to break. He had befuddled mind. He wasnt so sad when seeing people have accompli...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 538, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... accomplished achievement. Autistic, he didnt want to play or talk with anyone. Stayi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 19.5258426966 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 14.8657303371 7% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 33.0505617978 27% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 58.6224719101 29% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 508.0 2235.4752809 23% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 109.0 442.535393258 25% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66055045872 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.231146315 4.55969084622 71% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4837829371 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 215.323595506 40% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.788990825688 0.4932671777 160% => OK
syllable_count: 152.1 704.065955056 22% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 23.0359550562 52% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9497468356 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.4444444444 118.986275619 47% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.1111111111 23.4991977007 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 5.21951772744 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.559752860258 0.243740707755 230% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171973147366 0.0831039109588 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.240326429911 0.0758088955206 317% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.559752860258 0.150359130593 372% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 14.1392134831 47% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 48.8420337079 156% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 12.1743820225 46% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.86 12.1639044944 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 100.480337079 24% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 11.2143820225 61% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.7820224719 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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