None of us can deny the effect of luck in our life. When he was young, just graduated, after three years working for a Japanese firm, Tony was fired because of a restructured company, closing that business model around the world. Becoming unemployed for a year. At times helpless, holding a glass of water on his hands want to throw it to the ground. Feeling always upset because can't earn money, have nothing new to be able to break. He had befuddled mind. He wasn't so sad when seeing people have accomplished achievement. Autistic, he didn't want to play or talk with anyone. Staying inside the room with computers.
None of us can deny the effect of luck in our life. When he was young, just graduated, after three years working for a Japanese firm, Tony was fired because of a restructured company, closing that business model around the world. Becoming unemployed for a year. At times helpless, holding a glass of water on his hands want to throw it to the ground. Feeling always upset because can't earn money, have nothing new to be able to break. He had befuddled mind. He wasn't so sad when seeing people have accomplished achievement. Autistic, he didn't want to play or talk with anyone. Staying inside the room with computers.
- It is the time for a global Blockchain event as worldwide will be happened in Viet Nam with the serious investment of 7 technology pioneer units and attaching over 20 Viet Nam strongest communities in Blockchain field to co-ordinate organize 33
- It is the time for a global Blockchain event as worldwide will be happened in Viet Nam with the serious investment of 7 technology pioneer units and attaching over 20 Viet Nam strongest communities in Blockchain field to co-ordinate organize 33
- It is the time for a global Blockchain event as worldwide will be happened in Viet Nam with the serious investment of 7 technology pioneer units and attaching over 20 Viet Nam strongest communities in Blockchain field to co-ordinate organize 33
- It is the time for a global Blockchain event as worldwide will be happened in Viet Nam with the serious investment of 7 technology pioneer units and attaching over 20 Viet Nam strongest communities in Blockchain field to co-ordinate organize 33
- When he was young, just graduated, after three years working for a Japanese firm, Tony was fired because of a restructured company, closing that business model around the world. He was unemployed for a year. At times helpless, holding a glass of water in 33
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 381, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...he ground. Feeling always upset because cant earn money, have nothing new to be able...
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Line 1, column 462, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...ble to break. He had befuddled mind. He wasnt so sad when seeing people have accompli...
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Line 1, column 538, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... accomplished achievement. Autistic, he didnt want to play or talk with anyone. Stayi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 19.5258426966 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 14.8657303371 7% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 33.0505617978 27% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 58.6224719101 29% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 508.0 2235.4752809 23% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 109.0 442.535393258 25% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66055045872 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.231146315 4.55969084622 71% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4837829371 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 215.323595506 40% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.788990825688 0.4932671777 160% => OK
syllable_count: 152.1 704.065955056 22% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 23.0359550562 52% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9497468356 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.4444444444 118.986275619 47% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.1111111111 23.4991977007 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 5.21951772744 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.559752860258 0.243740707755 230% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171973147366 0.0831039109588 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.240326429911 0.0758088955206 317% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.559752860258 0.150359130593 372% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 14.1392134831 47% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 48.8420337079 156% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 12.1743820225 46% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.86 12.1639044944 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 100.480337079 24% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 11.2143820225 61% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.7820224719 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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