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I agree with the given statement that science and technology will prove to serve as the panacea for all the problems in the society, to a certain extent.
When we look at the present world, we’ve come a long, long way. And most of the things have been made possible mainly because of the plethora of wonderful inventions and discoveries in the scientific field. Our ancestors used to live in caves, roam about in search of food and shelter like nomads, fend off animals and beasts, and thrive to survive in the wilds. As decades went by, humans slowly started proliferating in the field of science and technology. For example, Graham Bell invented the telephone and that entirely changed the way humans communicated with each other. Before the invention of telephones, the only way humans had any contact at all was through letters and pigeons. Taking an example from a different field, the making of wheels was also a huge scientific breakthrough in the field of transportation, which inspired people to develop more and more vehicles to make transportation easier, flexible and time saving, and currently we humans have the facility to commute through cars, buses, aeroplanes and the riches even own helicopters and private jets. And the list just goes on…Life has gotten so much more easier because of the numerous technological advancements, which help putting an end to so many of our problems.
The number of youngsters and academic mavens and doyens venturing into the field of research and development, science and technology has been increasing exponentially. Every other day we get to know about another invention or another development in either the space field or in agriculture or in the medical sector or elsewhere. Even now, we are battling Covid and reconciling slowly with the help of the sciences involved in the medical field that provide us with the injections and medicines to beat Covid-19. The experiments are still in progress and scientists are thriving to attain a better accuracy for the vaccines every single day. Therefore, science and technology will always play a crucial role in the sustainability of the human race.
But I wouldn’t say that science can necessarily help solving all of society’s problems one fine day. That is because everything has its own pros as well as cons. Technology does not come without its banes. The increase in the global warming rates, erratic climate changes, highly toxic pollution levels, etc. are some of the few adverse effects that the excessive use of technology has given rise to. This literally implies that science and technology itself has produced quite a few societal problems. On a different note, sicence and technology aren’t the only tools that help mitigate the various societal problems. It is also us humans who take steps, who create public awareness, who bring the people together to fight for a cause or fight any problem. Without the humanity and empathy that we possess, no problem can be wholly eliminated from its root. It is us who contain the will power and determination to bring about a change, to come up with a solution to our problems and to be able to properly execute the solutions.
In conclusion, science and technology is and will always continue to hold a very important part in our lives, to help solve our problems, but it is also important for us humans to be well aware of the disadvantages of the same. It is important to be congnizant about the fact that robots and machines that science has given birth to can also possibly take over the world in a few decades, so we have to make sure we balance science and technology with our human morals, principles and way of living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1104, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Life
...private jets. And the list just goes on…Life has gotten so much more easier because ...
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Line 3, column 1128, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...st just goes on…Life has gotten so much more easier because of the numerous technological a...
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Line 3, column 1203, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to put', 'to putt' or 'put', 'putt'.
Suggestion: to put; to putt; put; putt
... technological advancements, which help putting an end to so many of our problems. T...
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Line 7, column 54, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to solve' or 'solve'.
Suggestion: to solve; solve
...t say that science can necessarily help solving all of society’s problems one fine day....
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Line 7, column 314, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...highly toxic pollution levels, etc. are some of the few adverse effects that the excessive ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, still, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 40.0 14.8657303371 269% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 89.0 58.6224719101 152% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3079.0 2235.4752809 138% => OK
No of words: 625.0 442.535393258 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9264 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.0 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74513375995 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 320.0 215.323595506 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 974.7 704.065955056 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.3928018367 60.3974514979 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.423076923 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0384615385 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.34615384615 5.21951772744 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308732113602 0.243740707755 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944047202749 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110681587207 0.0758088955206 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216148530801 0.150359130593 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764942701897 0.0667264976115 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 154.0 100.480337079 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.