“In order to alleviate the serious unemployment problem in our town, we should encourage Autotech to build its automobile manufacturing plant in our area. The Hillview landfill, which has been undeveloped for decades, is a perfect site for this plant. The building and staffing of this plant will put to work thousands of Hillview residents left unemployed after Computech computer software programming company abandoned its national facility last year. I am asking the City Council to authorize a large campaign to attract the company and offer significant tax incentives to make our town attractive to this giant of car manufacturing.”
Author calims subtle remark that the city council should attract different companies for setting a plant thereby giving them incentives in form of tax relaxation. The reason for the above averted fact is that the city is facing unemployment because of various computer aided companies have abandoned there captive or nationwide facility.
According to my perspective the firm fact stated is having many loop-holes. Author states that, "To alleviate unemployment automobile manuufacturing plant must be set up", though the reason of unemployment might be lack of streneous skill or there aggressive behaviour towards company. If the case is the same then the maufacuring industry won't help them, though some quality or skill development might work against unemployment.
Author states that the industry must be developed in a place which is not utilised for decades. There is a flaw in this becuase if the land is not utilised since decades some of the resons might be lack of soil firmness or some basic necessity of the life. If the unit is set-up then it can prove fatal for the residents during natural calamity. Also it might not be connected to the city which is the basic necssasity for a company.So a detailed report is needed in stating the firm fact that the industy must set up there.
One of the other flaw is that the author want's the city council to attract the indusry by giving tax relaxation but it can prove fatal for residents. Manufactuirng indusry tends to create noise and thus can be noxious for the quiesence earlier they had.
Computer or Tech companies abandoned there services the reason might be because of the lack of the skill in the employees so instead of invitng new firm for the employment, trainning must be giving to the youth so there self-esteem will be boosted and thus will get a adrealine to strive for a quality job.
Aggregating the uncoverd facts the author's notion is false and thus new trainning programs must be facilitated to encourage the town towards future endeavour.
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- “In order to alleviate the serious unemployment problem in our town, we should encourage Autotech to build its automobile manufacturing plant in our area. The Hillview landfill, which has been undeveloped for decades, is a perfect site for this plant. T 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 171, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... the land is not utilised since decades some of the resons might be lack of soil firmness o...
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Line 5, column 347, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... the residents during natural calamity. Also it might not be connected to the city w...
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Line 5, column 434, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...h is the basic necssasity for a company.So a detailed report is needed in stating ...
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Line 9, column 267, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...steem will be boosted and thus will get a adrealine to strive for a quality job. ...
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Line 11, column 36, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...b. Aggregating the uncoverd facts the authors notion is false and thus new trainning ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 340.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99411764706 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71171207043 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508823529412 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9922269476 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.615384615 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1538461538 23.4991977007 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23076923077 5.21951772744 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139037183233 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543741281465 0.0831039109588 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384316341964 0.0758088955206 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0727386132968 0.150359130593 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255190376717 0.0667264976115 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.