Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in areas where the disease is detected. However, since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations, we cannot permit inoculations against cow flu to be routinely administered.
<p class="MsoNormal">Author is giving the subtle and firm statement that the
inoculations should not be permitted against cow flu the wary reason being the
small possibility of the death because of it.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">There are many loop-holes in the stated verdict. Author
states that "Inoculations should not be performed due to mere death
possibility" but has ignored the vast perspective that what if the saving
rate is high than the mortality rate, then wholesome people will be saved,
because of a slight possibility of the death why should the life of 100's be
kept in danger. Although the cow flu is infectious so in the way there life is
in danger so inoculation can become a ray of hope for the infected youth.</p>
<p class="MsoNormal">The author claims to examine all the people in the area
infected by the cow flu but it a infection so all the areas not only the affected
areas must be examined, or else the mortality rate will increase in the other
areas. Often the flu's spread in endemic but it manifold with time.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">There might be certain traits in the body that reacts
opposite to the treatment and thus possibility of death increases, though it
might be the case that it is present in only few then why should the rest be
suffering. A study is required to state the author's firm fact.</p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Author also ignored the fact that the cow must be treated
instead of the people of the community. It is like " one rotten apple, rotten
all apple" meaning the a single affected cow can widespread the disease
and thus the cow must be treated. Certain measures must be taken to enlighten
the above fact.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Aggregating the uncovered facts it came to notice that the
inoculations must be performed.</p>
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Message: Did you mean 'manifolds'?
Suggestion: manifolds
...Often the flus spread in endemic but it manifold with time.
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Suggestion: Suffering
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...apple, rotten all apple' meaning the a single affected cow can widespread the ...
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Suggestion: And
...fected cow can widespread the disease and thus the cow must be treated. Certain m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 58.6224719101 51% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 300.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.13360497117 2.79657885939 184% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 23.0359550562 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.4412317422 60.3974514979 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 239.142857143 118.986275619 201% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.8571428571 23.4991977007 182% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 5.21951772744 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.97078651685 503% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18757546052 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10381567758 0.0831039109588 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379505007849 0.0758088955206 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0629609986512 0.150359130593 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472136264361 0.0667264976115 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.3 14.1392134831 186% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.85 48.8420337079 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 12.1743820225 162% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.97 12.1639044944 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 11.2143820225 168% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.7820224719 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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