Any form of art is the respective artist's imagination and is not restricted to any boundaries and frameworks. Consequently, the factors responsible to decide a particular art form to fall in merit is wide-ranging and obscure. Considering the understanding of people regarding an art work as the only basis of merit is quite narrow and unsubstantial.
To commence upon with, it is not necessary that popularity and comprehension by public are the only yardsticks to rate an art form. Artists from Van Goah to Picasso, literary progenies like Jane Austen and Franz Kafka, musical maestros like Bach and Ray Charles are acknowledged quite late of their time. However, this does not mean that their work were any less. Art is timeless and eternal and will inspire and connect to people if not today then tomorrow.
Furthermore, art is an abstract form and is not bounded by the barriers of language, culture, expertise and physical handicaps. Music of wizards like Bach and Mozart are used as therapies for alternate treatment of mentally handicapped people. It is quite plausible that the people taking therapies might not be aware about the technicalities, lyrics of the music but the tempo, rhythm, etc are just perfect to bring the ameliorative effect. Similarly, sufi songs are heard world wide though might not know the meaning of its lyrics, but it brings the desired placid effect. Therefore, art is as boundary-less as it is eternal.
However, where art can transcend boundaries and let people rejuvenate, in a similar fashion it can reach out to people and can be the cause of social change. But for that, the art form should be comprehensible and consonant with majority of people. For instance, many protests involve a poster or an anthem to fight against. In India, Vande Matram song was written by Rabindranath Tagore in order for arousal of patriotism in the people of the country to fight against the colonialsts. Hence, good art can educate and create empathy and empathy can used to bring change.
In summary, complete understanding and acknowledgement by large number of people cannot themselves decide the merit of any art form. For art is eternal, boundless and abstract in nature, can be recognized in merit based upon a single factor. Art is powerful and brings the freedom of expression with itself. With proper execution, art can bring changes to the life of most vulnerable groups of the society.
- SuperCorp recently moved its headquarters to Corporateville. The recent surge in the number of homeowners in Corporateville proves that Corporateville is a superior place to live than Middleburg, the home of SuperCorp's current headquarters. Moreover, Mid 50
- To serve the housing needs of our students, Buckingham College should build a number of new dormitories. Buckingham's enrollment is growing and, based on current trends, will double over the next 50 years, thus making existing dormitory space inadequate. 29
- In order for any work of art—for example, a film, a novel, a poem, or a song—to have merit, it must be understandable to most people.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your re 58
- The effectiveness of a country's leaders is best measured by examining the well-being of that country's citizens.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be 47
- As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and mysterious. 16
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 35, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'artists'' or 'artist's'?
Suggestion: artists'; artist's
Any form of art is the respective artists imagination and is not restricted to an...
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Line 5, column 475, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: worldwide
...effect. Similarly, sufi songs are heard world wide though might not know the meaning of it...
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Line 5, column 475, Rule ID: WORLD_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
...effect. Similarly, sufi songs are heard world wide though might not know the meaning of it...
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Line 7, column 72, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a similar fashion" with adverb for "similar"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...d boundaries and let people rejuvenate, in a similar fashion it can reach out to people and can be t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, regarding, similarly, so, then, therefore, for instance, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2030.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 403.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03722084367 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8964672876 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528535980149 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 639.0 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8407124692 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6666666667 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1904761905 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.21951772744 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189496152246 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615183774793 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403743698053 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111642971978 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428554897929 0.0667264976115 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 100.480337079 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.