In order for any work of art whether film, literature, sculpture, or a song to have merit, it must be understandable to most people.
If anything has esoteric meaning, it doesn't make any sense. As the writer contends, in order for any work of art whether flim, literature, sculpture, or song to have excellence, it must be understandable to most people. I strongly agree with the author's contention. If it is not understandable to most people, then what is the value of such task? However, the core essence of these works are to reflect the image of society, and absence of the primary goal, it cannot be said to have merit.
First of all, flim are those which relfects the images of the society, it has potentiality to make people aware, knowlegeable about the ongoing and past or future societal activities. If it is not understandable to most people, due to the absence of it's core value, it has no identity. One the other hand, if it cannot deliver the subject matter to the majority of people in the society, how can we consider such task with excellence? Flims are those powerful intruments to reflect and make aware about the evills ongoing in the society. Additionally, it applies for the literature as well. Literature are those writings which primarily contribute to make aware of people about the shortcomings, joy, importance of every aspects of mainkind. It must be accessible to the majority of people, without the cardinal goal, it cannot be sait to have excellence.
Second of all, sculpture are the arts which are reflector of the society. It reflects the societal traditions, methods, rituals, mispractice rituals etc. When majority of people don't understand the meaning, there is no meaning of such sculpture at all. For example, we often see ancient sculpture and know the past activities, looks, way of lilving, past beliefs and many more. When we don't understand any of them, the problem occurs, we simple see and there is no gaining of knowledge. Consequently, we don't mativated to watch such sculpture. If it is understandable to most of us, we are galvanized to scrutinize such scullpture in order to be well aware about the arts and it' s meaning, which might be very useful in order ot uplift our cerebral.
Third of all, we often listen song, do you know what purpose? Certainly for enjoyment and to hangout. If we don't understand the meaning of the song, do we really able to enjoy or hangout? Definitely not. Contrary to this, one can say that we can take enjoy from the lyrics rather than words. Though it sounds great to hear, but in reality it is not the case, if it was so then people were not writing words at all. In order to fulfill the cardinal goal of a song it must be undrstandable to most of the people.
in conclusion, any tasks such as flim, literature, sculpture, or a song it must be understandable to the most of the people in the society. Esoteric meaning of this works doesn't make sense at all since it' s primary goal is to be understandable to all. Without understandability, they cannnot be said to have merit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, look, really, second, so, then, third, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 58.6224719101 135% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2430.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 513.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73684210526 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75914943092 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84976919873 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.440545808967 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 774.0 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 6.24550561798 256% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 11.0 3.10617977528 354% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9158475346 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7857142857 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3214285714 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.10714285714 5.21951772744 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391477915089 0.243740707755 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968303372847 0.0831039109588 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105921371298 0.0758088955206 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241314541701 0.150359130593 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101231109338 0.0667264976115 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.