Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this time period, most of the complaints received from viewers were concerned with our station's coverage of w

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Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this time period, most of the complaints received from viewers were concerned with our station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, local businesses that used to advertise during our late-night news program have just canceled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to the program and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should restore the time devoted to weather and local news to its former level.

To base this change on the assumtion that local buisnesses pulled their advertising contracts and complacent calls from angry viewers would be a mistake. Late night news channels cover a variety of news topics including local news, oncoming weather, and national headlining news stories.

Viewers who take the time to call into a news station to give feed back are statistically going to be angry and have something they want to change. People who enjoy watching the late night news stations with national coverage, as yours does, do not take the time or want to expend their energy on calling the news station to provide positive feedback. If you would like statistically sound research you must conduct a local servey through the mail, email, or phone. THis would give more pf an accurate depiction of who watches the station, who enjoys watching, and who thinks it should be changed. All of these dependent variables need to be known in order for the study to be accurate.

Local buisnesses pulling and canceling their contracts may or may not have to do with the content of the program. It could have more to do with their financial soundness, their ability to produce quality advertizing, or where their finacial department thinks they money should be spent. A way to find out why they pulled out of their contracts is to communicate with them. Call the company and ask the person who is in charge of marketing or the financials to find out if the reason they cancelled their contract really because of the content of the show or for another reason.

Changing the content of the show from more of a national news headliner news station to more of a local and weather based news station may have no effect on viewers. There are a plethora of veriable that go into wherther or not people watch a certian television program. Since this is a late night news channel, maybe the show is run too late at night for there to be an abundance of viewers becasue most people are sleeping, maybe there are other programs on that are more popular, and lastley there could be more people than not that do not know this specific news channel runs on the channel it does and the time you air.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, really, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1802.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 385.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68051948052 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42323324697 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477922077922 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.976959491 60.3974514979 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.714285714 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 23.4991977007 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.35714285714 5.21951772744 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279719354443 0.243740707755 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100788678473 0.0831039109588 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106129386597 0.0758088955206 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194819003528 0.150359130593 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102062070062 0.0667264976115 153% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 48.8420337079 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.


Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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