People are too quick to take action: instead they should stop to think of the possible consequences of what they might do"
In this world many people have different nature and different thinking on the same condition or situation of life. Some of them are taking too quick action before thinking of its consequences and sometimes its good or sometimes very bad, but one of the best way for the future point of view is that for any action to do first find out its consequences.
Firstly, lets us know about the action which are taken too quickly without thinking its consequences or reaction are always temporary not the permanent solution and also their would be no surety that problem can not be reoccur after the quick action is taken without thinking. Action depends on the situation based but if it is personal or official long term solution is far better and to eliminate in such a way that in future it won't come again and this can happen with any action to do with all the consequence kept in mind.
Secondly, if we compare this action taken too quickly without consequence with history result always found negative impact or negative result.One of the most famous writer said that clam and steady always win the race and this implies on most of the situations, like whatever we saw is always not true and if we take action on the basis what we have saw would always make situation worst and when we come to know the originality about the situation we regret about why at that time i haven't think about the whole picture clear and taken action with the consequence would be more beneficial.
Some of the situation need to take action too quick as time not wait for anyone and if the time passes and we have spend whole time in thinking the consequence. So, it depends on only few situation demands and that we have to find as per our needs what to do or what not to.
Ultimately, if we see for the future point of view all the action we take would always be with thinking of all the consequence and to have permanent solution weather it would take even more time but the best result will come in all respect even official or personal.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2016-09-16 | Punit Singh | 50 | view |
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. 50
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. 50
- People are too quick to take action: instead they should stop to think of the possible consequences of what they might do" 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.19109947644 0.240241500013 80% => OK
Verbs: 0.159685863874 0.157235817809 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0994764397906 0.0880659088768 113% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0837696335079 0.0497285424764 168% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0575916230366 0.0444667217837 130% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.141361256545 0.12292977631 115% => OK
Participles: 0.0340314136126 0.0406280797675 84% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.3554563511 2.79330140395 84% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0235602094241 0.030933414821 76% => OK
Particles: 0.00261780104712 0.0016655270985 157% => OK
Determiners: 0.0916230366492 0.0997080785238 92% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.020942408377 0.0249443105267 84% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0183246073298 0.0148568991511 123% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2029.0 2732.02544248 74% => OK
No of words: 368.0 452.878318584 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51358695652 6.0361032391 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.271739130435 0.366273622748 74% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.171195652174 0.280924506359 61% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.127717391304 0.200843997647 64% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0842391304348 0.132149295362 64% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3554563511 2.79330140395 84% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 219.290929204 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4375 0.48968727796 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.1133017977 55.4138127331 81% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6194690265 39% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 46.0 23.380412469 197% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 142.58396649 59.4972553346 240% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 253.625 141.124799967 180% => OK
Words per sentence: 46.0 23.380412469 197% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.674092028746 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.21349557522 153% => OK
Readability: 63.1195652174 51.4728631049 123% => OK
Elegance: 1.21739130435 1.64882698954 74% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279472261154 0.391690518653 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.190528047607 0.123202303941 155% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0814537836874 0.077325440228 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.773984924701 0.547984918172 141% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.157619485693 0.149214159877 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164205474732 0.161403998019 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566201536602 0.0892212321368 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.362599286456 0.385218514788 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0411547147961 0.0692045440612 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202085298738 0.275328986314 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507692254349 0.0653680567796 78% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.4325221239 29% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 7.22455752212 42% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 13.5995575221 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.