As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Technology is the new name of the world in this generation as mention in the issue topic that "people rely more and more on technology to solve problems" which is true during such present condition. Even i am also agree with this point of view that we always try to solve the problems or we can say now even works in our daily routine life with the technology and we don't wish or want to use ability of humans to think for themselves. If same situation will further carry it seems that human ability will deteriorate soon or later.
Firstly i will say if we see in our daily routine life we can not leave without mobile phone or without technology, as one can remain without food is possible now days but without technology it is very difficult for even single minute. Even if we see a simple mathematical calculation we are doing with the help of calculator, as this is very small example but similar types of many examples are their in our routine life which make our thinking ability diminished and it will create problem further. IF further we can see humans efficiency is going down and down regularly.
Secondly technology is made in such a way that it will act as a helping hand but humans using this technology as a necessity in our life. Even we can say technology making humans lazy and less active about their work and totally rely on the technology results. Now days even the results come from the technology is not verified by any humans, as they think technology is more superior than humans. As they forgot that technology is made by humans only, so humans are more superior than technology if we work in such a manner. Now days we can see from small age children use mobile phones or other technology for their enjoyment, but do we think that this technology would be harmful for the health point of view and also negative impact of the child.
To think world without technology is like to live without water. Technology is also important part of the life as many things we can do with the limited time frames or we can use for recheck and many other activities but humans totally rely on them and stopped using their efficiency and their capabilities on which they are best.
Further more i will add to solve the problems if we use technology will not we work out in both personal and official life, as technology do not have feelings to think and decide, so might in personal life we think like technology and solved even personal problems like that and which is not fruitful in any condition. As peoples not even wish to walk as they have options of bike, cars, bus etc. in just a small distance and will suffer from many problems in future.
Lastly for the future point of view if we see we totally rely on the technology it would be more difficult for the humans to survive or even use their thinking for themselves for their betterment or also same it will effect on each prospect not only official but also personal. Technology is a part of life but we must not forget that this all technology made by humans, so we always rely on our thinking and make such a condition that will deteriorate.
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| 2016-09-17 | Punit Singh | 50 | view |
- People are too quick to take action: instead they should stop to think of the possible consequences of what they might do" 50
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. 50
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: don't
...routine life with the technology and we dont wish or want to use ability of humans t...
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...l deteriorate soon or later. Firstly i will say if we see in our daily routine...
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Suggestion: superior to
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Suggestion: superior to
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...ance and will suffer from many problems in future. Lastly for the future point of view...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'lastly', 'second', 'secondly', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.207641196013 0.240241500013 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.156146179402 0.157235817809 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0913621262458 0.0880659088768 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0863787375415 0.0497285424764 174% => OK
Pronouns: 0.078073089701 0.0444667217837 176% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.146179401993 0.12292977631 119% => OK
Participles: 0.0182724252492 0.0406280797675 45% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.47380080314 2.79330140395 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0166112956811 0.030933414821 54% => OK
Particles: 0.00166112956811 0.0016655270985 100% => OK
Determiners: 0.0614617940199 0.0997080785238 62% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0365448504983 0.0249443105267 147% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00996677740864 0.0148568991511 67% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3139.0 2732.02544248 115% => OK
No of words: 568.0 452.878318584 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5264084507 6.0361032391 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88187981987 4.58838876751 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.264084507042 0.366273622748 72% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.204225352113 0.280924506359 73% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.133802816901 0.200843997647 67% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0880281690141 0.132149295362 67% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47380080314 2.79330140395 89% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 219.290929204 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.37323943662 0.48968727796 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.9076041264 55.4138127331 79% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6194690265 87% => OK
Sentence length: 31.5555555556 23.380412469 135% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.9827334762 59.4972553346 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 174.388888889 141.124799967 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5555555556 23.380412469 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.674092028746 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.21349557522 173% => OK
Readability: 51.9780907668 51.4728631049 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.16062176166 1.64882698954 70% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.431122467719 0.391690518653 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.129622837942 0.123202303941 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.101110490008 0.077325440228 131% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.59317821785 0.547984918172 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.168686737307 0.149214159877 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177367291429 0.161403998019 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837531052959 0.0892212321368 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.335888960779 0.385218514788 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0604438716979 0.0692045440612 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.294453776252 0.275328986314 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107185316962 0.0653680567796 164% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.30420353982 132% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 3.66592920354 191% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 18.0 13.5995575221 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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