There are hundreds of ways by which you can deliver a message to someone: by a hand-written letter, an electronic mail, or by a simple SMS. But does it matter how you receive that message? Yes, it is extremely important.
For example, consider a wedding. In any culture, people place a lot of emphasis on the invitations. Everyone finds out about the wedding through word of mouth but they still wish to receive it officially from the bride and the groom. In India, people print wedding cards and go visit their relatives and close friend's houses personally to pass on the wedding invitations. While in America the bride and the groom write hand-written invites showing how much the receiver of the invite is important to be present on their wedding day. If one were to simply send an SMS saying that they are getting married, the receiver of the message might not simply feel close enough to the bride or the groom.
Alright, let me ask you a question: Would you be comfortable if you were to receive your break-up message in a simple text message? It would probably make the person more angry about receiving it through a text message than the break-up itself! Quite the opposite yet similarly, getting yes to a marriage proposal would, a lot of times depend on the atmosphere. It could be roses or a football stadium, alone or in front of the family, despite the difference in personal preferences, how the person asks their partner for their hand in marriage is extremely important.
However, there are also a few cases where the message itself is way more important than how it is passed on to you. My friend's grandfather was in a critical condition in the ICU after an accident, but her family didn't tell her worrying that she wouldn't take it well over the phone. So they waited until the weekend when she would go home from the hostel to tell her about her grandfather in person. But unfortunately, her grandfather passed away before the weekend and she couldn't spend his final moments by his side. She was heartbroken because of it and blamed her family for not telling her right away.
Therefore, I think as much as it is important how you convey some messages, sometimes the importance of the message could outweigh everything else. Thus depending on the situation occasionally the message would carry more influence but most of the time, in my opinion, the way the message is conveyed plays a huge role.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, similarly, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2003.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 424.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72405660377 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59502456653 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521226415094 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8611833876 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.421052632 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3157894737 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84210526316 5.21951772744 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0975770757992 0.243740707755 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0326634861918 0.0831039109588 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339450895638 0.0758088955206 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0589870637858 0.150359130593 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186131153318 0.0667264976115 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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