At first glance, it might appear as technology makes humans lethargic and enervate their intelligence. However, technology helps human to become more innovative and smart because it requires lot of perception and creativity to bring up a new product in to the market. Our everyday activities start with the use of technology from communication to virtual reality. Brain starts functioning more efficiently when it is used in this way to bring out astonishing results. Technology has made our life easier and help solve many problems.
To begin with, technology has helped humans reach another planet which was impossible in the ancient days. It baffles me how humans have reached the moon and have successfully conducted different experiments to know about the various climatic conditions and its characteristics. This helped people to learn new things that the great scientists have brought forward using Scientific Technology. Many satellites are sent in to the space which help in communication and global positioning system. Thus, global positioning has helped humans in navigation with the help of these satellites. Recently India has launched a rocket with 22 satellites from different countries which involve communication and navigation.
Additionally, Technology has helped humans to communication even when they are thousands of miles apart. It is easy to send message from anywhere around the world. Furthermore, technologies have helped to video call and communicate. The profligate innovations of humans brought up artificial intelligence which works according to the needs of people. Creating these technologies helped humans evolve and increased their power of imagination and thinking capabilities.
Most importantly, technology has helped humans cure diseases which were incurable in the past. Smallpox which was once a pernicious disease has been cured which the help of a vaccine. In the early days, millions of people were affected by this virus. With the help of vaccine, it is eradicated and smallpox has never occurred again in the 21st Century. The development of technology has created machinery from x-rays to detection of diseases. This field of development has helped humans survive even dreadful diseases.
To sum it all, technology has developed humans thinking capabilities and helped solve many problems which would affect human life. Technology is a developing field which will lead to many more inventions and bring out creativity and help in leading a better life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'thus', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.260143198091 0.240241500013 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.205250596659 0.157235817809 131% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0883054892601 0.0880659088768 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0405727923628 0.0497285424764 82% => OK
Pronouns: 0.035799522673 0.0444667217837 81% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0930787589499 0.12292977631 76% => OK
Participles: 0.0692124105012 0.0406280797675 170% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.02205755132 2.79330140395 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0381861575179 0.030933414821 123% => OK
Particles: 0.00954653937947 0.0016655270985 573% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0739856801909 0.0997080785238 74% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00715990453461 0.0249443105267 29% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0286396181384 0.0148568991511 193% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2511.0 2732.02544248 92% => OK
No of words: 385.0 452.878318584 85% => OK
Chars per words: 6.52207792208 6.0361032391 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.58838876751 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.402597402597 0.366273622748 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.303896103896 0.280924506359 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.249350649351 0.200843997647 124% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.187012987013 0.132149295362 142% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02205755132 2.79330140395 108% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 219.290929204 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537662337662 0.48968727796 110% => OK
Word variations: 60.0421940514 55.4138127331 108% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6194690265 116% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0416666667 23.380412469 69% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8012539685 59.4972553346 47% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.625 141.124799967 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0416666667 23.380412469 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.291666666667 0.674092028746 43% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 46.4312770563 51.4728631049 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.5 1.64882698954 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.438711095868 0.391690518653 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.10069294393 0.123202303941 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0959808992422 0.077325440228 124% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.495890851054 0.547984918172 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.105651283997 0.149214159877 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159277808712 0.161403998019 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618611843532 0.0892212321368 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.321802515538 0.385218514788 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0772655766975 0.0692045440612 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.299139991881 0.275328986314 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269689758475 0.0653680567796 41% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.4325221239 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 7.22455752212 180% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.5995575221 140% => OK
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It is a little bit off the topic. It is not about the advantages of technology.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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