"As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate."
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The topic raises a controversial issue whether the ability of humans to think for themselves deteriorate as they rely more and more on technology to solve problems. it is indeed true that technology has played a vital role in reducing the burden on the human brain. but my no means can we conclude that our mental abilities reduce as a result of this as the very technology that helps us is indeed a result of human creation. Thus, I generally disagree with the opinion that technology deteriorates the ability of humans to think for themselves
technology has greatly reduced the cognitive load on the human brain by performing not only simple, unimportant, day to day tasks but also a few complex ones that could not be done previously by humans. For example, the advent of Artificial Intelligence and machine learning has produced some technological marvels in the field of medicine. machines can identify tumors, cancer cells and other diseases at an accuracy greater than that of humans. this has made the life of both patients and doctors easier and it allows the latter to concentrate on tasks where human presence in required, like critical surgeries.
technology saves a lot of time and resources when compared to its absence. previously, in the absence of internet, to gain knowledge of a particular topic one would have to either attend a few classes, visit the library or talk to subject-matter-experts (S.M.Es). but at the expense of a few minutes of browsing the internet a common man can have access to highly arcane topics like Nuclear Energy or Quantum Physics.this instant access to resources can cause humans to think further about the topics and possibly contribute to the field in the form of research.
technology has both positive and negative aspects to it. Scientific studies have shown that a child's brain develops the most at the age of 3-8 years. Their brains must be kept active and be tasked with innovative ways in order to facilitate good overall development of brain. Kids these days spend a lot of time on their phones doing things that don't task their brain, like watching videos. Even adults use technology to a very high extent sometimes that performing simple math without a calculator or another electronic device seems impossible. Overuse of technology has its negative effects.
overall, technology has paved the way for humans to tackle problems on a higher order by simplifying their life by abstracting out most of the tasks ranging from simple task like performing addition of two numbers to the most complex ones like helping a man land on moon. While technology plays a vital role in the progress of humanity, it is the humans themselves who create or improve such technologies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, while, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2278.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 458.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97379912664 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83085317798 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550218340611 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 729.0 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 106.266329907 60.3974514979 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 118.986275619 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9411764706 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.29411764706 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163591628706 0.243740707755 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551440589845 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073888378463 0.0758088955206 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921858191111 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0919344056725 0.0667264976115 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.1392134831 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 100.480337079 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.