Essay topics:
As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
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- The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company According to a recent report from our marketing department during the past year fewer people attended Super Screen produced movies than in any ot 37
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate 50
- Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well being of the societies and environments in which they operate Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations provided they operate within the law is to make as mu
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate 50
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasonin
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 7, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Yes
...ith in the short span of time. Infact,Yes I agree with statement because the tech...
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Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...lems with less time. For example:-If an person want to travel from one place to...
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Line 5, column 145, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , apple
...e technology is used such as google maps,apple maps,hire maps. However,No I dis agr...
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Line 5, column 156, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , hire
...y is used such as google maps,apple maps,hire maps. However,No I dis agree with th...
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Line 7, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , No
...le maps,apple maps,hire maps. However,No I dis agree with the statement because ...
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Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...e and more students. For example:-If an student having exams in mean while of e...
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Line 9, column 44, Rule ID: MEAN_WHILE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'meanwhile'?
Suggestion: meanwhile
... example:-If an student having exams in mean while of exams he/she are playing exams and w...
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Line 9, column 71, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...ing exams in mean while of exams he/she are playing exams and watching movies in yo...
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Line 9, column 171, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun marks is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... gets distrubed and they will get score less marks in the exams. Where as, Yes I ...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Whereas'?
Suggestion: Whereas
...l get score less marks in the exams. Where as, Yes I agree with the statement because...
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Line 11, column 159, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , instagram
... social networking apps such as facebook,instagram,whatsapp,snapchat,twitter. For examp...
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Line 11, column 178, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , snapchat
...apps such as facebook,instagram,whatsapp,snapchat,twitter. For example:- if an person ...
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Line 13, column 18, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...p,snapchat,twitter. For example:- if an person wants to communicate each other ...
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Line 13, column 179, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...short span of time anad they can create an group chats to communicate each other. ...
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...oup chats to communicate each other. Thus the statement states that the technolog...
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Line 15, column 285, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'place'
Suggestion: place
...n of time.in future the technology will places an major key and more and more impact t...
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Line 15, column 292, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...me.in future the technology will places an major key and more and more impact to p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, thus, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 19.5258426966 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 33.0505617978 30% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 2235.4752809 63% => OK
No of words: 272.0 442.535393258 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14705882353 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.73760928715 2.79657885939 134% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 215.323595506 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459558823529 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 704.065955056 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 23.0359550562 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.5375724726 60.3974514979 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 175.0 118.986275619 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0 23.4991977007 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342835802882 0.243740707755 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175963299447 0.0831039109588 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.170372115528 0.0758088955206 225% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175963299447 0.150359130593 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.170372115528 0.0667264976115 255% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 14.1392134831 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 48.8420337079 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 100.480337079 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 11.2143820225 139% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.7820224719 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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