The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company.
"According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies than in any other year. And yet the percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers about specific Super Screen movies actually increased during the past year. Clearly, the contents of these reviews are not reaching enough of our prospective viewers. Thus, the roble lies not with the quality of our movies but with the public's lack of awareness that movies of good quality are available. Super Screen should therefore allocate a greater share of its budget next year to reaching the public through advertising.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.0 out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 10 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 6 2
No. of Sentences: 6 15
No. of Words: 378 350
No. of Characters: 1951 1500
No. of Different Words: 100 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.409 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.161 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.639 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 154 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 99 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 74 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 46 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 63 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 22.465 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.679 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.74 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.358 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 2 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 163, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
...produced movies than in any other year. thus, the roble lies not with the quality of...
^^^^
Line 2, column 301, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Super
...t movies of good quality are available. super screen should therefore allocate a grea...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...aching the public through advertising. however,super screen should therefore allocate ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , super
...the public through advertising. however,super screen should therefore allocate a grea...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Firstly
...aching the public through advertising. firstly,According to a recent report from our m...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , According
...the public through advertising. firstly,According to a recent report from our marketing d...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 165, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...-produced movies than in any other year.i dis agree with this statement and they ...
^
Line 4, column 227, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...statement and they have failed to built an movie super screen-produced movies with...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...reen-produced movies with in any year. secondly,And yet the percentage of positive revi...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , And
...duced movies with in any year. secondly,And yet the percentage of positive reviews ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Clearly
...ctually increased during the past year. clearly, the contents of these reviews are not ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 238, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...hing enough of our prospective viewers. .i dis agree with this statement and they...
^
Line 5, column 239, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ing enough of our prospective viewers. .i dis agree with this statement and they ...
^
Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... with this statement and they have less no of the percentage of positive reviews ...
^^
Line 5, column 295, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... this statement and they have less no of the percentage of positive reviews by mo...
^^
Line 5, column 427, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Clearly
...ctually increased during the past year. clearly, the contents of these reviews are not ...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finally
...ot reaching enough of our prospective. finally, thus, the roble lies not with the qual...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 147, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Super
...t movies of good quality are available. super screen should therefore allocate a grea...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 270, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...eaching the public through advertising. .i dis agree with this statement and the ...
^
Line 6, column 271, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...aching the public through advertising. .i dis agree with this statement and the r...
^
Line 6, column 439, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Super
...t movies of good quality are available. super screen should therefore allocate a grea...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , According
...ic through advertising. In conculsion,According to a recent report from our marketing d...
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Line 8, column 175, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...duced movies than in any other year.yes i agree with this statement and the recen...
^
Line 8, column 254, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , during
...ent report from our marketing department,during the past year, have more people attende...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.6327345309 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.9520958084 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 13.6137724551 22% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 28.8173652695 97% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 55.5748502994 130% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2002.0 2260.96107784 89% => OK
No of words: 373.0 441.139720559 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3672922252 5.12650576532 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98451754594 2.78398813304 107% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 204.123752495 50% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.276139410188 0.468620217663 59% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.9 705.55239521 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.22255489022 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 19.7664670659 76% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.1831989579 57.8364921388 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.466666667 119.503703932 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8666666667 23.324526521 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 5.70786347227 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 5.15768463074 136% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 5.25449101796 457% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.20758483034 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 6.88822355289 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.527763543044 0.218282227539 242% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.233399080873 0.0743258471296 314% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.22577467917 0.0701772020484 322% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.370176816412 0.128457276422 288% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.217195461642 0.0628817314937 345% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 14.3799401198 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.3550499002 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.197005988 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.5979740519 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.32208582834 82% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 98.500998004 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 12.3882235529 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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