As people rely more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think
for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Technology has been advancing through ages. The advancement of technology is never
ending and also people depending on it. Technolgy has made human life easier than
before. It can solve many complex problem's easily and that too in very less time.
People rely on technolgy more and more as it advances. Technology is part of every
person's daily routine.
Technology is the result of human inteligence. Eventhough people depend on technology
too much there is no reason that ability of humans to think for themselves will
deteriorate. As the technology advances the level of inteligence will also increases.
For example, internet has become major source of information. People are able to
learn new stuff, post something they know, get information about something and many
more things. Before people were unaware about most of the things. If they hadd any
doubt about anything they would have limited information from the people around them.
But now they can have compete information about anything and also improve themselves .
Everything has its own advantages and disadvantages. There should be alimit to everything.
People should not be more dependent on technology. They should use it only when it is really
necessary. There has been misuse of technology also. For example, Almost everyone has
a phone nowaday's and cannot live without it. Their day starts with checking their phone
and ends with it. We cannot imagine living without phone.
The technology will be always advancing and so the people also with it. It's the people
who is responsible for the advancement of the technolgy. Though people are dependent on technology
it will not deteriorate their thinking.
- As people rely more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to thinkfor themselves will surely deteriorate. 50
- People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making. 33
- Over the past two years, the number of shoppers in Central Plaza has been steadily decreasing while the popularity of skateboarding has increased dramatically.Many Central Plaza store owners believe that the decrease in their business is due to the number 50
- As people rely more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to thinkfor themselves will surely deteriorate. 50
- People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making. 33
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 41, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... People rely on technolgy more and more as it advances. Technology is part of ever...
^^
Line 9, column 14, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...think for themselves will deteriorate. As the technology advances the level of in...
^^
Line 9, column 76, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'increase'
Suggestion: increase
...nces the level of inteligence will also increases. For example, internet has become majo...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 80, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ource of information. People are able to learn new stuff, post something they kno...
^^^
Line 12, column 14, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... about something and many more things. Before people were unaware about most of the t...
^^^^^^
Line 12, column 67, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... were unaware about most of the things. If they hadd any doubt about anything th...
^^
Line 12, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...out most of the things. If they hadd any doubt about anything they would have lim...
^^^
Line 13, column 63, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
...hey would have limited information from the people around them. But now they can have compete informa...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 14, column 23, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'competed'.
Suggestion: competed
...ple around them. But now they can have compete information about anything and also imp...
^^^^^^^
Line 14, column 85, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...out anything and also improve themselves . Everything has its own advantages an...
^^
Line 18, column 48, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ry. There has been misuse of technology also. For example, Almost everyone has a ph...
^^^^
Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e cannot imagine living without phone. The technology will be always advancing ...
^^^
Line 22, column 16, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[8]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'will' and 'be'.
Suggestion: will always be
...iving without phone. The technology will be always advancing and so the people also with i...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 22, column 73, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...vancing and so the people also with it. Its the people who is responsible for the ...
^^^
Line 23, column 58, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e for the advancement of the technolgy. Though people are dependent on technology it ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 270.0 442.535393258 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34444444444 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72035566843 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559259259259 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 23.0359550562 43% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.9711826992 60.3974514979 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 57.72 118.986275619 49% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.8 23.4991977007 46% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.52 5.21951772744 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.97078651685 422% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 17.0 4.83258426966 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295609032878 0.243740707755 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812076121766 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847715369372 0.0758088955206 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862530896036 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794538507482 0.0667264976115 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.51 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 100.480337079 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 11.2143820225 54% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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