People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">People's behavior is determined by the environment they are brought in. Their behavior is mostly developed by the people around them. It depends on the individuals how they
determine their behavior. The forces around them will determine their behavior.
When they are children their behavior are mostly impacted by the people surrounding them. They observe the people around them and adopt which seems right to them. The people around them
are important factor for individuals behavior. For example, in India people are more crazed about cricket. It's because almost all of Indian's love cricket. So by birth the child will
be surrounded by these cricket enthusiastic people so it'll have impact on it's behavior.
People as they grow up may change their behavior. As they grow they'll have better understanding and so choose their behavior. They may change some of their behavior.
For example, an individual is being a introvert throughout his childhood. He may choose to change it or now depending on him. If that individual is surrounded by the people who are
extroverts. He may also change some of his behavior changing his behavior.
The people's behavior is mostly determined by the surrounding environment.So, the forces play an important role in people's behavior. </span><br>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 154, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
.... Their behavior is mostly developed by the people around them. It depends on the individuals how they...
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Line 1, column 216, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... It depends on the individuals how they determine their behavior. The forces aro...
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Line 2, column 27, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding forces'?
Suggestion: The surrounding forces
...ls how they determine their behavior. The forces around them will determine their behavior. When ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... them will determine their behavior. When they are children their behavior are mo...
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Line 4, column 164, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: The surrounding people
...em and adopt which seems right to them. The people around them are important factor for individuals b...
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Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...a people are more crazed about cricket. Its because almost all of Indians love cric...
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Line 8, column 64, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they'll
...may change their behavior. As they grow theyll have better understanding and so choose...
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Line 9, column 37, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...r. For example, an individual is being a introvert throughout his childhood. He ...
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Line 9, column 126, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e to change it or now depending on him. If that individual is surrounded by the pe...
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Line 9, column 173, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... individual is surrounded by the people who are extroverts. He may also change some of...
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Line 12, column 5, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
... behavior changing his behavior. The peoples behavior is mostly determined by the su...
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Line 12, column 74, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...termined by the surrounding environment.So, the forces play an important role in p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 58.6224719101 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1132.0 2235.4752809 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 208.0 442.535393258 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44230769231 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.55969084622 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2288083564 2.79657885939 115% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 215.323595506 47% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490384615385 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 704.065955056 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 23.0359550562 48% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.5995709086 60.3974514979 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.8888888889 118.986275619 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.5555555556 23.4991977007 49% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.21951772744 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.97078651685 181% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327152442834 0.243740707755 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137024854616 0.0831039109588 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100042261738 0.0758088955206 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177568792053 0.150359130593 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11820076591 0.0667264976115 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 48.8420337079 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.09 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.38706741573 83% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 100.480337079 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 11.8971910112 38% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 11.2143820225 57% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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