People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings than by society as a whole.
People's behavior depends on their needs, their group, their culture, and their development. There are some factors which affect a lot on people's attitudes like their present situation and surroundings. The prompt suggests that People's beliefs are more dependent on their immediate situation and surrounding rather than the whole society. In my opinion, I do agree with the statement because of the following reasons.
To begin with, any person is an intrinsic part of his society, yet society comprised of several different types of people. Consequently, we cannot predict one particular person's behavior based on its society's reaction. A person's behavior highly influenced by his current needs and his response to the current situation. For instance, one community has a good reputation in adhering to its ethics and moral principles, and never take part in the malediction. However, one person of that society gets admitted to the reputed university through bribery because that person did not have enough grades to take admission via the normal process. Because a person thinks that if he does not take get entry to the particular university, his career will be vanquished, so he takes the step of bribery, which is against their society's norms. The above example illustrates that a person's needs and the situation can break the limitation imposed by society. Thus, it is feasible to say that people's attitudes determined majorly from their contemporary situation and not through the whole society.
Furthermore, most of the person's attitudes are derived from their parents and their closest ones because a person adapts to the behavior of their surroundings. As a child, one's mind is empty and adopt the characteristic of their parents, teachers, and friends. Consequently, one person can be attributed to a particular society by his birth, but his attitudes depend solely on the person's surroundings. For example, one person born in a financially weak house and always lacks the basic necessity. Consequently, a person's parents teach him to save money and sacrifice the lavish needs. However, that person may learn to steal or sell drugs from his friends or television to ameliorate the shortage of money. He devolved into debauchery through the surrounding situation and his response to the situation. However, we can not say that he gets terrible habits from his society because it did not influence the person's behavior. The above example demonstrates that a person's attitude can be concluded through his surrounding situation and not by the whole society.
Some may argue that person follow the rules and regulation of the particular society so we can conclude that most of the personal attitude derived from society. However, if the person is not closet to society, then we cannot assert the same. Also, personal needs and external environments had more influence on a person's attitude than the whole society. All things considering, we can say that people's attitudes derived from the immediate situation and vicinity rather than society as a whole.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'several'.
Suggestion: several
...f his society, yet society comprised of several different types of people. Consequently, we canno...
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Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ently, we cannot predict one particular persons behavior based on its societys reaction...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...avior based on its societys reaction. A persons behavior highly influenced by his curre...
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Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...vior of their surroundings. As a child, ones mind is empty and adopt the characteris...
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Line 5, column 909, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ociety because it did not influence the persons behavior. The above example demonstrate...
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Line 5, column 965, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
.... The above example demonstrates that a persons attitude can be concluded through his s...
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Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
...d not by the whole society. Some may argue that person follow the rules and regula...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...al environments had more influence on a persons attitude than the whole society. All th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2578.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 491.0 442.535393258 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25050916497 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82839339427 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452138492872 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 811.8 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5384766026 60.3974514979 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.12 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.64 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.83258426966 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323220214003 0.243740707755 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106781346809 0.0831039109588 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125271387874 0.0758088955206 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247602440087 0.150359130593 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117944959539 0.0667264976115 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.