People should question the rule of authority as opposed to accepting them passively.
People should prefer to question the rule of authority rather than blindly following them. Without a doubt, there can be no rule that is perfect; there can always be an improvement possible. The authority can make rules that may seem right to them at the time of making, but it is possible that it turns out to be wrong. Therefore people should not be following a rule without being pragmatic about it.
To begin with, no rule can be perfect; so people should always think twice before following. For example, there is a new rule that the government of India came up with: people should link their Adhar card, which is a new unique identity card for Indians, with their bank accounts. Even though this rule was made up to track down all the business transactions and try to secure everyone's data, It turned out to be precarious as reports started coming out stating that some people got hacked and all of their money was stolen.
Furthermore, if a rule comes out, people should always question whether it's going to work in practical scenarios. Going back to the previous example, people found out about the technical flaws of such a nationally introduced identity system much later. If everyone could ask the question: how will you make sure our personal information is safe and secured and cannot be exploited? then maybe the government would have either made sure that there are no loopholes to the system before its launch, or discarded the rule in the first place.
In contrast to the above-mentioned situations, there can be a situation where people simply aren't aware of how secure is their personal information. So by issuing the new identity card: Adhar card, the government has taken a great initiative for the people to have a generalized identification system, rather than instead of having multiple systems, for them just as the current identity security system in the USA: social security number. So by making the rule that everyone in India should have an Adhar card, the government has taken the best decision and such a decision can be followed by people for their own good whether they like it or not.
In conclusion, It is always a good idea to ask the question: Is this rule of authority appropriate and helpful to everyone? if the answer is yes then there is no doubt we can follow it. But if the answer is no then something needs to be done about it. However, sometimes people can be incapable of knowing whats best for them and if they follow the rule of authority, it can be ultimately beneficial for them to follow without questioning it.
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- People should question the rule of authority as opposed to accepting them passively. 66
- People should question the rule of authority as opposed to accepting them passively. 66
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a new unique identity card for Indians, with their bank accounts. Even though th...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Suggestion:
...ios. Going back to the previous example, people found out about the technical fla...
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Suggestion: ask
...ty system much later. If everyone could ask the question: how will you make sure our personal in...
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Message: “if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt, in contrast to, to begin with, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2127.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 448.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74776785714 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56950475995 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473214285714 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 671.4 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5337371499 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.166666667 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8888888889 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11111111111 5.21951772744 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264261743061 0.243740707755 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109850946766 0.0831039109588 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101319336919 0.0758088955206 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172454283884 0.150359130593 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633034689364 0.0667264976115 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.