People should question the rules of authority as opposed to accepting them passively.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and
explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should
consider the reasons for which the statement may or may not be true and explain how these considerations
shape your position.
Rules are made such that limited resources can be shared equally without any conflict. So when there are unnecessary rules then they can be opposed rather than accepting it blindly. But it depends on what type of rule it is. If a rule is for the benefit of the society one should abide them if not they can protest for it
Lets take an example of Schools and college's they have limited rules for the benefit of the students. When a student is caught cheating they are banished from the exam hall as the student will not grow in his life due to cheating and if he successfully cheats then the students who are sincere will get effected by it. So government made certain rules where there is a benefit for student to grow in his life.
Certainly, Traffic rules are one among the benefits of the society. Not following traffic rules causes great loss and sometimes it might cost some-one's life. There are certain traffic rules which one should not take it for granted like crossing the red signal is very bad habit. There are many people who don't follow traffic rules. When you drive two wheeler it's compulsory to wear an helmet these rules are created for one's safety. By not abiding them causes one's own loss. Drink and Drive is also one such case even celebrities don't abide this rule they have caused many accidents due to drink and drive case and where later arrested. Some ran their vehicles on a bunch of poor people who sleeping by the roadside.
But there are few cases where rules can be opposed like when the government makes a rule for their own benefit instead of the society can be opposed. Like in india we have reservation system for lower caste system. The reason this was made because lower caste were not so keen about pursuing their education so government has given some reservation for such people but this caused a lot of damage to other's as people who scored good marks were unable to get into good colleges because they dint have any reservation and the people who scored less could have gotten into the top college's due to reservation. the rules should be made in a such a way that it does not effect the caste, creed and color.
So according to the above examples we can say that people can question the rules of authority as sometime's they can be wrong. The rules should be in such way that it should not be partial to anybody. It should be completely impartial if they are partial then the people will have the right to question the authority. The authority should also understand the point of view of society when they are making any rules. One cannot form a rule and pass it blindly. Sometimes the society's point of view can be taken in consideration to make a better place for everyone to fit in.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So when” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...be shared equally without any conflict. So when there are unnecessary rules then they c...
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Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
... them if not they can protest for it Lets take an example of Schools and colleges...
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Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ry bad habit. There are many people who dont follow traffic rules. When you drive tw...
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Line 5, column 383, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...rive two wheeler its compulsory to wear an helmet these rules are created for ones...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...r an helmet these rules are created for ones safety. By not abiding them causes ones...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... is also one such case even celebrities dont abide this rule they have caused many a...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...to the top colleges due to reservation. the rules should be made in a such a way th...
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Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...e made in a such a way that it does not effect the caste, creed and color. So acco...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2244.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 496.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52419354839 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24682904664 2.79657885939 80% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.435483870968 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 729.9 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.2046100362 60.3974514979 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.958333333333 5.21951772744 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167509515825 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053329401371 0.0831039109588 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355137723857 0.0758088955206 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959876551134 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280610344741 0.0667264976115 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 14.1392134831 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 12.1639044944 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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