People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The decisions one makes in life are not surrounded by the same circumstances. Sometimes decisions need to be based on emotions and other times on logic. However, one thing we cannot do is make decisions based on emotions and justify them with logic and vice versa.
Most dilemmas that we face or situations that we are in on a day to day basis first need to be looked at logically. That's how we are able to analyze an issue. If we let emotions get the best of us we run the risk of not understanding how to correctly respond to an issue. We tend to look at the issue from only one angle i.e. the one that justifies our emotions and this leads to tunnel vision. Once a decision is made based on emotions then the logic used to justify it might be contrived due to the emotional attachment that one might have with the decision. In a lot of cases, the logical justification for an emotional decision ends up pointing out the flaws in the decision itself.
There are however certain situations in which the decision has to be based on emotions. In those cases, the justifications for those decisions have to be rooted in emotion as well. For example, someone on a healthy diet who is trying to lose weight might want to have pizza for dinner because they feel like it. If they do, then they cannot use logic to justify it because pizza is not an inherently healthy food.
Therefore, to summarise, if a decision is based on logic then it must have a logical justification. And if its based on emotion, then it must have an emotional justification.
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- People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the pos 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...s first need to be looked at logically. Thats how we are able to analyze an issue. If...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ts how we are able to analyze an issue. If we let emotions get the best of us we r...
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Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...otions and this leads to tunnel vision. Once a decision is made based on emotions th...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'inherently healthy food'.
Suggestion: inherently healthy food
...ogic to justify it because pizza is not an inherently healthy food. Therefore, to summarise, if a decis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, well, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 2235.4752809 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 283.0 442.535393258 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48763250883 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65701356043 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498233215548 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 704.065955056 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4709598636 60.3974514979 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.6666666667 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 5.21951772744 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280340823471 0.243740707755 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113170593438 0.0831039109588 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829723253107 0.0758088955206 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190121352408 0.150359130593 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617514057844 0.0667264976115 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 14.1392134831 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 12.1639044944 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 100.480337079 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.