People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.

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People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.

The Issue is whether or not folk who make decisions based on feeling and justify those decisions with rationale, afterwards are weak decision makers. I concur People take wrong or poor decision at the emotion time, and behind this agreement, my following reasons mentioned below:

Firstly, Folk cannot difference between true and false when they are in emotion. This means when someone is in emotion that time they cannot take correct decision. Because He is take decision on under pressure of emotion, So he cannot different between candid and Counterfeit. For instance, People are always support their friends in any situation whether their friends is correct or false. Furthermore, Sometime their friends perhaps false at that time they are support to wrong person.

Secondly, Decision is taken at emotion time it perhaps to Grow misunderstand with folk. This means when peeps take decisions based on their emotion is begin to break relationship. For example, Student want to make his future in his passion field Like: Cricket, But His Parent do not agree with his decisions and force to study. If student don't follow his path then maybe his lost his career.

On the other hand, If student follow his road then make him a lucrative career. But it very trivial to shun his parent decisions and run in his way.

In the whole, the original statement is veracity. Folk take decisions based on their emotion afterwards their decision is poor. Because People don't difference between trustworthy and brazen when they are in emotion mode.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
The Issue is whether or not folk who make decisions based on feelin...
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Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'begun'.
Suggestion: begun
...ake decisions based on their emotion is begin to break relationship. For example, Stu...
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Line 5, column 329, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... with his decisions and force to study. If student dont follow his path then maybe...
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Line 5, column 340, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ecisions and force to study. If student dont follow his path then maybe his lost his...
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Line 9, column 144, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... their decision is poor. Because People dont difference between trustworthy and braz...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 2235.4752809 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 254.0 442.535393258 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08661417323 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46858870366 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 215.323595506 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51968503937 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 704.065955056 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2396156377 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1333333333 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.21951772744 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389796332831 0.243740707755 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14039846902 0.0831039109588 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.169664822792 0.0758088955206 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259462631455 0.150359130593 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.197375511018 0.0667264976115 296% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 100.480337079 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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