Respond to the instructions below and support your position with relevant reasoning drawn from your academic studies, reading, observation, and/or experience.
The issue is wheather or not so long as they are know about the dangers involved, adults should not be legally bound to wear seat belts. I'm not agree with this statement because whether it adults or old people they should use of seat belts while driving for safety purpose.
Firstly, In this modern era every day acident are rose, and in this situation seat belt can save our life. It is not only helpful in acident, but it is also useful when they are sleep while driving a car, and they feel comfortable. For instance, Let assume a car acident with a truck if both driver weared seat belt then they have less injure compare to not wearing the seat belt because they not weared seat belt then their head crashed with a driving handle.
Secondly, Nowsdays Adult people going in high speed, so it rise to chance acident happen. adult people love to drive more than 100km/hr speed. on other hand older people drive on average speed like 50-60km/hr it is safe speed to drive a vehicle. More than 80km/hr speed is increase chance to happen acident.
On the whole, original statment was not veracity, Adults peeps always use should seat belts because for safety and their overspeed.
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. 50
- The charts summarise the weight measurements of people living in Charlestown in 1955 and 2015. 67
- The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. 67
- Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military. 33
- Pirouettes Ballet School is the clear choice for any child. Of all the dance schools in Elmtown, Pirouettes has the most intensive program, and our teachers have danced in the most prestigious ballet companies all over the world. Many of our students have 18
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
... is wheather or not so long as they are know about the dangers involved, adults shou...
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Line 1, column 138, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ot be legally bound to wear seat belts. Im not agree with this statement because w...
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Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... are sleep while driving a car, and they feel comfortable. For instance, Let assu...
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Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'rises'?
Suggestion: rises
...Adult people going in high speed, so it rise to chance acident happen. adult people ...
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Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Adult
...d, so it rise to chance acident happen. adult people love to drive more than 100km/hr...
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Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...love to drive more than 100km/hr speed. on other hand older people drive on averag...
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Line 7, column 63, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... statment was not veracity, Adults peeps always use should seat belts because for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, for instance, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 210.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67142857143 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.07776807691 2.80592935109 74% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7141306245 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.01713382729 0.244688304435 7% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00580890391708 0.084324248473 7% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0116672664069 0.0667982634062 17% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00987245983575 0.151304729494 7% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00998406324919 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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