People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
In the life of a person emotions and practical thinking plays an equally important role.Only thinking emotionally and later on justifying it as logical decision leads to something vague.A balance between emotions and practical thinking may lead to a proper decision.
When thinking about career,work,settlement in life,etc. being practical is most important.For example, youth now adays is ready to sacrifice their career for the sake of relationships they get into at early age, but when thought of practically cant relationship and career be managed simultaneously?
Decisions taken on basis of emotions have no logic behind, they are just heat of the moment thoughts and drag you down when you have to face the challenges so as to achieve your goals.Emotional decisions may be result of saving yourself from the sadness or mental stress which could to faced later on.
When it comes to health issue of our near and dear ones,some serious incidents with people we love,etc. being emotional is genuine, but above that we need to be practically thinking of how to overcome the situation. If emotions take over here it would lead to disaster.
For example,in case of operations when we are asked to sign a declaration of doctors not being responsible of whatever happens we have to practically sign it even though our emotions don't support us
for the sake of welfare of the patient.
If at that moment we do not sign the declaration and operation is delayed it may lead to disastrous consequences.
Best example I think for logical thinking is of doctors who keep aside all their emotions just to carry out there work successfully.
Emotional thinking is of course needed,but always the priority should be to the practical side of issue. Taking decisions while being emotional and later on giving logical reasons to it is not justified.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, while, as to, for example, i think, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 304.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13486842105 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03971397717 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572368421053 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.4412248548 60.3974514979 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.083333333 118.986275619 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.21951772744 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.97078651685 181% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176973840081 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683464861813 0.0831039109588 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072351808162 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0745853788101 0.150359130593 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702929257348 0.0667264976115 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.1392134831 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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