It is not uncommon among people to ruminate over any important dceision in their life, and immediately start to second guess it or justify their decision once the decision has been made. The prompt suggests that people who let their emotion interfere in their decision making and then later justify it with llogic are poor decision makers. While I do concede that in some decisions , letting emotions be a factor is not justified but, I mostly disagree with this statement for the following two reasons.
To begin, A person's upbringing , values and surroundings play a huge role in their decision making process. The way any person takes a decision and thinks about the outcomes of the decisions comes from their values and traditions. So, it can be safely said that no logic is absolute in someone's life. Emotions drive a person's thinking process and logic. For instance, A person thinking about going to abroad for higher studies is a huge decsion in their life. This decision will not only affect their personal life but also people who are associated with him will also be affected. So factoring in emotions insuch a life-altering decision is not illogical. Such big decisions in life are driven by emotions and then justifying such decision with the logic afterwards does not necessarily make them a poor decision maker, because thinking about their family , factoring in the the emotions of his/her family while making such a decision is the right thing to do.
Furthermore, making a decision for personal hapiness is always driven by emotions as it should be. Such decisions are justifiable because choosing one's own happiness is never illogical. Because , in some cases, one cannot justify their own happiness, desires with only logic. Cases, where personal decisions are made only on the basis of logic might affect their hapinness . So, factoring in emotions while taking a personal decision does not necessarily mean it cannot be justified with logic.
However, I do concede that professionals while taking a decision that will impact thousands of people's lives must take a decision on the basis of logic and not let their emotions interfere with the decision.For instance, the government of a state must put their emotions aside while making a contract with another state which will benefit their state by large scale. Similarly, managers who has the resposnsibility of many employees lives on their shoulder cannot take a rash decision during an emotional fit. He has to think and factor in everyone's positions while taking the decision and justifiying a decision taken during an emotional fit later with logic makes them a poor decision maker.
In conclusion, one must try to be impartial while taking a decision on which a lot of people depend on. At the same time, there are many personal and scocietal decisions where factoring in emotions in the decision making process is the logical thing to do
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, second, similarly, so, then, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2432.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 484.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02479338843 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69041575982 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6468788582 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.438016528926 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 786.6 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.6609564691 60.3974514979 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.80952381 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0476190476 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.80952380952 5.21951772744 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383373423209 0.243740707755 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149026635711 0.0831039109588 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751320161598 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268838221282 0.150359130593 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304900989369 0.0667264976115 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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