Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position
Laws set the values and regulations of a nation. It is not uncommon that people tend to find loopholes in laws and get away with many improper actions. So laws by nature being stringent is more apt. However , the prompt suggests that laws should be flexible while considering different situations and different cases. In my opinion , I mostly agree with this recommendation for two reasons.
Life doesn't only consist of right and wrong actions. Anything that doesn't fall under the conditions of being right doesn't make it an action a wrong one. There are many circumstances --gray area-- in life. For instance , When observed from an independent point of view , hitting someone , being violent goes against the law. But when circumstances are brought into perspective for example in case , where a women a pedestrian is attacked by a gang of robbers who are trying to snatch away her belongings . It seems absurd to think abou the law in that situation , let alone abide by it. In that situation , the only thought appropriate for such a situation would be self defense than just abiding by law and stay completely silent. Thus , when circumstances , time and places are brought into account while judging an action , the action can be more rightly judged. This example rightly justifies the suggestion made by the prompt.
Furthermore, Society and times are ever changing. One decades right action cannot be justified in another decade. Such changing time is what provokes amendments in law. If laws are not flexible enough to take into account the perspective of ever changing societies , it will only bring chaos and increase the crime rate. If we take into account the laws that prevailed in the 1800s , it would not be a proper fit for the current society. For instance , slavery laws that existed during the 1700s-1800s , if time , place and circumstances were not taken into account ,there may have never been amendments of such laws.
However , I do concede that in cases of some egregious crimes, laws should be exacting, Otherwise people tend to find loopholes in them and abuse the loopholes. For example, someone who belongs to a minority group / race might take advantage of the law being flexible and considering towards the circumstances of the minor and get away with their crimes. Government should try to consider past cases where people tried to take advantage of loopholes in laws and continuosly improve the structure of the constitution for such cases.
In other words, laws should be tractable enough to consider all circumstances of a person while judging their action but at the same time , the structure and outline of the laws should be free from any inconsistency, a person might take advantage of.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2266.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 453.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00220750552 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72450324007 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505518763797 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 693.0 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.890502448 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4166666667 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54166666667 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 7.80617977528 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237938442511 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682617570506 0.0831039109588 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449947263493 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149233348501 0.150359130593 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302697085408 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.