Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Should law be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times and place? In society the law puts everyone in check. Laws are systems put in place to promote order. How are laws even passed? What factors goes into the making and passing of laws? Laws have significantly reduced disorder in a society making it a huge concern as to what should be taken into account a law.
I am of the view that the law should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances ,times and place as opposed to not taking all these into consideration and these are my reasons why?
First and foremost,Taking into various factors ,times and place facilitates the need for fairness and equity which the law seeks to achieve.
In passing a laws, fairness and equity can only be driven by all outcomes being considered in the passing of the law. The use of 5 why’s by Ishikawa can be employed . Is this fair to both genders? What is the average age being affected ? What socio-economic factors are driving this to happen? What class of people are affected the most? This helps in driving fairness in a society.
Secondly, this approach allows for no compromises. With factors such as time ,place and circumstance are put into consideration speaks to the fact that no one is above the law. In Africa where it’s significant to have people using the position ,power and wealth to bend laws ,a huge halt or reduction will be seen when such considerations are taken. Laws will be made irregardless of race ,status and opulence. Every circumstance is considered hence putting every individual in check .
Lastly, flexibility of laws fuelled by the condition of time, place and circumstances allows for greater outcome when feasibility studies are taken.
With pastoral and urbanised areas, living is entirely different but when such conditions and extremities are taken into the making of the law the outcomes of people adhering and complying is higher as compared to a law being made solely for country A and be used across country B with no prior amendments.
With the points stated above, I believe dynamism of the law as a result of circumstances, times and places is pivotal in driving a substantial change in society.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
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...and foremost,Taking into various factors ,times and place facilitates the need for...
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Line 5, column 12, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a (laws)' or simply 'laws'?
Suggestion: a (laws); laws
... the law seeks to achieve. In passing a laws, fairness and equity can only be driven...
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Line 5, column 165, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...e of 5 why’s by Ishikawa can be employed . Is this fair to both genders? What is ...
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Line 5, column 296, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Line 7, column 77, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...o compromises. With factors such as time ,place and circumstance are put into cons...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ficant to have people using the position ,power and wealth to bend laws ,a huge ha...
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Line 7, column 275, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... position ,power and wealth to bend laws ,a huge halt or reduction will be seen wh...
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Line 7, column 389, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
.... Laws will be made irregardless of race ,status and opulence. Every circumstance ...
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Line 7, column 484, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... hence putting every individual in check . Lastly, flexibility of laws fuelled ...
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Line 10, column 199, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...people adhering and complying is higher as compared to a law being made solely for...
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Line 11, column 31, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...ndments. With the points stated above, I believe dynamism of the law as a result...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, as to, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1854.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 379.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89182058047 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81026520574 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488126649077 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 67.2313388983 60.3974514979 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6086956522 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4782608696 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47826086957 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267385044275 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809665587016 0.0831039109588 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0914866105718 0.0758088955206 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142641565004 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735480387721 0.0667264976115 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...t should be taken into account a law. I am of the view that the law should be f...
^
Line 2, column 97, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...to take account of various circumstances ,times and place as opposed to not taking...
^^
Line 4, column 19, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: ,
...re my reasons why? First and foremost,Taking into various factors ,times and p...
^
Line 4, column 47, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...and foremost,Taking into various factors ,times and place facilitates the need for...
^^
Line 5, column 12, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a (laws)' or simply 'laws'?
Suggestion: a (laws); laws
... the law seeks to achieve. In passing a laws, fairness and equity can only be driven...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 165, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e of 5 why’s by Ishikawa can be employed . Is this fair to both genders? What is ...
^^
Line 5, column 296, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...mic factors are driving this to happen? What class of people are affected the most? ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 77, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...o compromises. With factors such as time ,place and circumstance are put into cons...
^^
Line 7, column 244, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ficant to have people using the position ,power and wealth to bend laws ,a huge ha...
^^
Line 7, column 275, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... position ,power and wealth to bend laws ,a huge halt or reduction will be seen wh...
^^
Line 7, column 389, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
.... Laws will be made irregardless of race ,status and opulence. Every circumstance ...
^^
Line 7, column 484, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... hence putting every individual in check . Lastly, flexibility of laws fuelled ...
^^
Line 10, column 199, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...people adhering and complying is higher as compared to a law being made solely for...
^^
Line 11, column 31, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...ndments. With the points stated above, I believe dynamism of the law as a result...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, as to, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1854.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 379.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89182058047 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81026520574 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488126649077 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 67.2313388983 60.3974514979 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6086956522 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4782608696 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47826086957 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267385044275 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809665587016 0.0831039109588 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0914866105718 0.0758088955206 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142641565004 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735480387721 0.0667264976115 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.