Governments should place few, if any, restrictions on scientific research and development.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Research and development in every industry has proven with figures the rise in creativity and the driver for continuous improvement why then must government place restrictions on them. I believe restrictions on scientific research and development will not only draw us back looking at the present digital age in the world but will also inhibit the rate at which citizens can meet up with the fast paced technological world.
Below are the reasons why disagree with this recommendation.
First and foremost, Scientific research and development drives innovation. Scientific Research and development has cushioned human intelligence to steer the drive of innovation. With the surge in AI , people creativity has improved significantly with web developments to personalised AI to having a chunk of information at ones disposal to using this data to make decisions. Data engineering roles ave been popularised and the drive to produce and solve a problem is on the Hugh. Problem solving and gap closures have significantly improved.
Secondly ,scientific research and development has helped improved overall efficiency. From assignments to robotised systems to personalised and well integrated systems , efficiency has been improved. People no longer struggle to access information or communicate . People do not need to waste too much time on getting through to another or even working from another country . Research and development has granted us the pedestal to be more efficient in the daily activities.
Lastly the exposure that comes with Research and development has been phenomenal. It has pushed us to the edge to grow with the fast paced and dynamic technological world.to become technological savvy one needs to research and show him or herself worthy. Jobs spaces have changed , roles have improved and only the individual with exposure is deemed articulate and hardworking.
Placing restrictions is not only disadvantageous but draws us back in a fast paced technological world. And as richly stated improved efficiency, exposure and innovation will do so much for the digitalisation of a country.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 186, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
... government place restrictions on them. I believe restrictions on scientific rese...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rive of innovation. With the surge in AI , people creativity has improved signific...
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Line 4, column 324, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... AI to having a chunk of information at ones disposal to using this data to make dec...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ve significantly improved. Secondly ,scientific research and development has ...
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Line 7, column 168, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...personalised and well integrated systems , efficiency has been improved. People no...
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Line 7, column 263, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...gle to access information or communicate . People do not need to waste too much ti...
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Line 7, column 374, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...her or even working from another country . Research and development has granted us...
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Line 9, column 280, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...herself worthy. Jobs spaces have changed , roles have improved and only the indivi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, look, second, secondly, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 33.0505617978 36% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 325.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51692307692 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2376359433 2.79657885939 116% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550769230769 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.7490740653 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6111111111 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0555555556 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2004969994 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067207250841 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580403470026 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104490024877 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452564916934 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 186, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
... government place restrictions on them. I believe restrictions on scientific rese...
^
Line 4, column 199, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rive of innovation. With the surge in AI , people creativity has improved signific...
^^
Line 4, column 324, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... AI to having a chunk of information at ones disposal to using this data to make dec...
^^^^
Line 7, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ve significantly improved. Secondly ,scientific research and development has ...
^^
Line 7, column 168, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...personalised and well integrated systems , efficiency has been improved. People no...
^^
Line 7, column 263, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...gle to access information or communicate . People do not need to waste too much ti...
^^
Line 7, column 374, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...her or even working from another country . Research and development has granted us...
^^
Line 9, column 280, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...herself worthy. Jobs spaces have changed , roles have improved and only the indivi...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, look, second, secondly, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 33.0505617978 36% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 325.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51692307692 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2376359433 2.79657885939 116% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550769230769 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.7490740653 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6111111111 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0555555556 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2004969994 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067207250841 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580403470026 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104490024877 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452564916934 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.