Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
As the civilization grows and the conception of society is form, and everyone who works and live in the society needs to be regulated, and thus the human made the law. But the society is forever changing, the mind in people are changing day by day, so some argue that laws should be flexible and should take account of situations, times and space. I mostly agree with the idea in the following two reasons.
To begin with, law is a serious thing and it should be fixed. If the law is changed so often, law itself may lose its power, which will induce a impression that the law is weak and can be challenged. In this way, law is no longer a tool to regulate people, but a thing to entertain, which is not tolerated. For example, in the very end of every dynasty in ancient China, the government and the emperor, being corrupted, cannot manage the nation good enough. They changed the law a lot, or they do not even rely on the law to settle down problems. And in that period, the society is a mess, that crime, theft and burglar happen everywhere. In this way, law is nothing after being too flexible according to the governor’s will.
That is being said, nowadays the society is rapidly changing and some issue that was seen as wrong or illegal was actually mistaken. For example, Turing, known as the inventor of computer, was homosexual and during that time, homosexual is illegal, since it might controvey some religion spirit. After being recognized as homosexual, Turing was punished heavily, which result him in suicide. But now we all know that there are many kinds of love and affection, besides male and female, thus we change the law to correct the previous mistake. Laws need to be flexible so that we can correct the mistake our history has made.
Also, similar thing might have different causes and motivations, thus law should be flexible. There are some murder cases, in which the murderer is actually the defender who protect himself or anyone else against the ill-intended person, but unfortunately kill the bad guy. If the law is not flexible enough and do not give then inspector enough time to dig out the truth, there would be so many people being punished because of the guilty that does not belongs to them.
Law is a serious thing, and a sophisticated one as well. Law is never piles of paper, and law is law only when law is correctly applied by the judge. In this way, law should be flexible enough to correctly judge the bad from the good. To realize such ultimate goal, we human being still has a long way to go.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gulate people, but a thing to entertain, which is not tolerated. For example, in ...
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Line 7, column 455, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belong'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: belong
...hed because of the guilty that does not belongs to them. Law is a serious thing, and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, if, may, so, still, then, thus, well, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 39.0 19.5258426966 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2099.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 458.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58296943231 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42513522675 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519650655022 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 654.3 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.77640449438 563% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5608946342 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4090909091 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8181818182 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215093538882 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067738513199 0.0831039109588 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424537086567 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130419768852 0.150359130593 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277760534565 0.0667264976115 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 48.8420337079 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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