Human posses a basic character called as 'adaptability'.Behavior of person is also closely related to adaptability. People's behavior is the one source we try to make justifications and rate his moral.The character of the person is largely determined by the way he behaves in the society.But the society itself plays a major role is shaping the persons's behavior.The people's behavior is greatly determined by the external factors that he encounter in his day to day life.People in society judge us by the way we behave but society itself is one of the major factor affecting the behavior.
Everyone in this world have a role model whom we like to follow.We try to posses all the character that our role model inhibits.It's good that we try to adapt the good things from our role models.It may help us becoming a better person.But we humans are also blessed with the 'brains' which has got an ability to distinguish between good and bad.So its will be definitely helpful to inculcate the good behavior of our role model.
Environment,Society,Culture,Religion etc. also plays crucial role in person life.They mold the behavior of the person.Who wants to be a thief or a terrorist by birth?But the environment ,the people with whom the child grew up will force him to be malevolent and the same society will curse him to be so.There's famous quote 'person is known by the company he keeps'.So the company we keep will shape the our character& behavior.If the child is grown is grown in the favorable and morally good environment he will definitely do good in his life for himself as well as society.A child is like a plant; If a plant gets good sunlight,water and fertilizers it will definitely flourish and grow well.Similarly, if a child is grown in happy,cheerful ambiance and taught good values it will be a good citizen & behave well.
In today's world of technology it's hard to keeps our hands away from the mobiles phones,social media & television.But these gadgets tacitly affect our behavior.To illustrate ,the fitness models we see on the mobile internet have effect on our behavior.Who does not wants to look fit and shredded?These fitness models claim in ads that they have used certain supplements so if we use those supplement we will be fit immediately.So we fall for the gullible tricks and at last curse ourselves.
Everybody has some congenital values like intelligence,Honesty,loyalty etc.We must adhere to those values to make our self better.To conclude,the external forces will definitely shape our behavior but its up to us what values we inculcate and what we abandon.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'similarly', 'so', 'well', 'as well as', 'by the way']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.250535331906 0.240241500013 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.184154175589 0.157235817809 117% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0770877944325 0.0880659088768 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0406852248394 0.0497285424764 82% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0920770877944 0.0444667217837 207% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0899357601713 0.12292977631 73% => OK
Participles: 0.0299785867238 0.0406280797675 74% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.51337997355 2.79330140395 126% => OK
Infinitives: 0.03426124197 0.030933414821 111% => OK
Particles: 0.00428265524625 0.0016655270985 257% => OK
Determiners: 0.100642398287 0.0997080785238 101% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0235546038544 0.0249443105267 94% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0107066381156 0.0148568991511 72% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2588.0 2732.02544248 95% => OK
No of words: 433.0 452.878318584 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.97690531178 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.58838876751 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.325635103926 0.366273622748 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.240184757506 0.280924506359 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.173210161663 0.200843997647 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.136258660508 0.132149295362 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.51337997355 2.79330140395 126% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 219.290929204 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501154734411 0.48968727796 102% => OK
Word variations: 56.3272699192 55.4138127331 102% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6194690265 34% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 61.8571428571 23.380412469 265% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 231.197150607 59.4972553346 389% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 369.714285714 141.124799967 262% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.8571428571 23.380412469 265% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.42857142857 0.674092028746 212% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 5.21349557522 767% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 85.8756186077 51.4728631049 167% => OK
Elegance: 1.16891891892 1.64882698954 71% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332704371172 0.391690518653 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.156100589191 0.123202303941 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0961890743848 0.077325440228 124% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.772629296094 0.547984918172 141% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.347382452054 0.149214159877 233% => Sentences are changing often in a paragraphs.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158912750617 0.161403998019 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108940139544 0.0892212321368 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.305122475677 0.385218514788 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0287198142095 0.0692045440612 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206938937214 0.275328986314 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826400069599 0.0653680567796 126% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.4325221239 48% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 13.5995575221 44% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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