People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
It is possible in some situations that people behave in a manner that did not choose it. In this case there are so many different elements that could affect on that type of behavior. Some people think that force could be really effective in that situations. I strongly agree with this arguments and I believe that this assertion is true based on 3 reason that I will discussed furthers.
First of all, sometimes the main reason that we behave in some manner is because of the consequences of other effective things. For example one person could speak in an angry way with someone but only because of the fact that he/she is upset over something else which is not related to that person.
Secondly, in so many cases, It is not in our power to decide over some issues and that could affect our behavior in other aspect. imagine the situation that someone is angry about something that happened and some part of his/her life is going to change but there is no way to prevent that from happening.
Third of all, some of our behaviors originate from our unconscious and we do not even realize why we behave in a certain way. It is really complicated to explain about this phenomenon but it is proved that sometimes our behavior reflected our unconsciousness. For example the way we react about dangerous situation is based on that phenomenon.
Although some people believed that we choose our behavior by ourselves and nothing could affect that, but I think that most of our behavior is determined by force and they are out of our control.
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- The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company. "According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies than 62
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ot choose it. In this case there are so many different elements that could affect on that type...
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Line 1, column 151, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...e so many different elements that could affect on that type of behavior. Some people thin...
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Line 1, column 281, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... that situations. I strongly agree with this arguments and I believe that this asser...
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Line 1, column 368, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'discuss'
Suggestion: discuss
...n is true based on 3 reason that I will discussed furthers. First of all, sometimes th...
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Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an angry way" with adverb for "angry"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ngs. For example one person could speak in an angry way with someone but only because of the fa...
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Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...k in an angry way with someone but only because of the fact that he/she is upset over something else whi...
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Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Imagine
...ld affect our behavior in other aspect. imagine the situation that someone is angry abo...
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Line 9, column 90, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...behavior by ourselves and nothing could affect that, but I think that most of our behavior ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, third, for example, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.3162921348 186% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 33.0505617978 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 2235.4752809 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 272.0 442.535393258 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6875 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5288746651 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 215.323595506 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485294117647 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 704.065955056 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6820990251 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.25 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 5.21951772744 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0922376417134 0.243740707755 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037274928707 0.0831039109588 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348010318985 0.0758088955206 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0574337083871 0.150359130593 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394125350942 0.0667264976115 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 100.480337079 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.