People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Behavior is natural response of a human being in any situation happening around him. From making any personal decision to professional decision, behavior plays important role. We start constructing our behavior from childhood and continue so on. The external factors play a role of shaper in developing our behaviors.
First of all, we have to understand that person's own behavior is also developed through the outside forces, for instance, a child learns from its family, school and growing up in a society helps to shapes its behavior. In a study conducted by B, provided the outcome that children of abusive and arrogant parents were likely more arrogant. In fact, person's own making is also somewhat drawn from outside forces. Our actions shows our social and cultural groups, as for example when in Rome, do what Romen do. It is true that whenever we visit any country with different culture, it influences our behavior.
Additionally, the factors like political factor also plays role in building certain type of behavior. For example, the political conditions in Africa created an environment where rebels are influencing young children to pick guns in their hands. This way, the political conditions changes the behavior of the society as well as children. Political factors largely influence the human behavior, as a layman hardly thinks to raise voice in any protest or political decisions; circumstances may arise when people joins the protest and fight against the certain decision. Recently, Indian government took a decision on Citizenship Bill, which enforced Indian-Muslim community to raise voice. People like them may be not at all interested in doing such activity, but it made them to do so.
Moreover, economical conditions also influence the behavior of people. People in developing countries fight everyday for food, and sometimes they choose some wrong ways to earn that. Children join low level of jobs in factories rather than joining a school for study. This is the direct impact of economical factors which shape behavior of the community.
Hence, people's behavior is hardly own making, the decisions are influenced by the outside forces. Our everyday communication to the world creates our behavior.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... behavior plays important role. We start constructing our behavior from childhood...
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Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'shape'.
Suggestion: shape
...ol and growing up in a society helps to shapes its behavior. In a study conducted by B...
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Line 13, column 11, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...t it made them to do so. Moreover, economical conditions also influence the behavior ...
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Line 13, column 109, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...e. People in developing countries fight everyday for food, and sometimes they choose som...
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Line 13, column 298, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...for study. This is the direct impact of economical factors which shape behavior of the com...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, well, as for, for example, for instance, in fact, as well as, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1893.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 356.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31741573034 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75025535076 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592696629213 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9362761488 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1428571429 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9523809524 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38095238095 5.21951772744 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134273129512 0.243740707755 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416796712677 0.0831039109588 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0271509637552 0.0758088955206 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826554168452 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166437335148 0.0667264976115 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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