A person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor.
The goal of every modern society is the presence of harmony and camaraderie amongst its citizens along with development, both financially and holistically. It has often remarked that this universe strongly values the principle of duality - just as light exists, so must darkness, sorrow and joy, good and evil. In certain cases, the forces of evil impede the progress of the good and hence stall the overall development of the society. This force of evil is often manifested as individuals who understand the gravity of their depraved actions and yet continue to partake in such illicit activities. Hence, for any society to develop and grow, there must be a system that reprimands such individuals and therefore, for such individuals the freedom to retain civil rights or the right to benefit from his/her own labour must be forsaken.
In this day and age, where we are bombarded with news from the various media organizations of depraved acts such as terrorism, murder, rape, it is therefore increasingly important to establish a form of deterrence to prevent such acts from recurring. For example, the 9/11 attacks in America where one of the most devastating attacks on humanity which resulted in the loss of around 3000 innocent victims. When America took a strong stance and went after the perpetrators without any remorse and did not provide them their civil rights, it set up a powerful message. This message had its weight and since then, there have been no such attacks on American Soil. Hence, this example portrays the importance of treating heinous crimes with gravity and not providing any sort of civil rights to the perpetrators.
Civil rights are those which include the right to vote and the right to participate in the election process of a nation. Another justification for taking away civil rights from individuals who have convicted of crimes which they knowingly convicted. is that there is often no benefit to society at large for providing these people such benefits. For example, let us consider the case of the Las Vegas Shootings which happened recently in which a single person took the lives of more than 160 innocent people who were there for a concert. This attack was planned well in advance and the person who conducted these attacks wanted to inflict as much destruction as possible. How can a society benefit from providing such individuals civil rights? Their acts of depravity certainly mirror their despicable state of mind and hence again they should not be given any such rights.
In contrast, one may argue that it is not humanitarian to take away another human beings civil rights and instead there should be a focus on the reformation of the person in question. This could be taken as the truth only for certain cases and not as a general law. There must be a strong deterrence for such individuals so that they do not commit such crimes and taking away their civil rights should act as a basic deterrent for such people. Unless we have data which clearly shows that taking away rights is detrimental to these individuals in question and leads to further recidivism, we cannot confirm any of these things and we are put under the impression that such people are just wishful thinking.
In conclusion, as we have seen from the aforementioned examples of the various crimes being committed, we need to have a strong approach to condemn such illicit behaviour. Unless there is a powerful deterrent to such acts, the society cannot develop and its people may suffer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 251, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Is
... crimes which they knowingly convicted. is that there is often no benefit to socie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2929.0 2235.4752809 131% => OK
No of words: 591.0 442.535393258 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95600676819 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93056706295 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63068697249 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 283.0 215.323595506 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478849407783 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 912.6 704.065955056 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4899504797 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.347826087 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6956521739 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.34782608696 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246602820781 0.243740707755 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746236904284 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821350178632 0.0758088955206 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136095779909 0.150359130593 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733278216392 0.0667264976115 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 100.480337079 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.