Leadership involves guiding people through the right direction and not letting them astray from their primordial motivation. The prompt suggests that the right qualities of leader prefer cooperation over competition. I mostly agree with the prompt, however I do concede that competition can create better leaders in some aspects.
Firstly, a cooperative leader has better way of 'dealing' with situations. A composite leader is likely to treat every situation equally. This means that if the leader is willing to comply with other countries, or companies it will have a better chance of surviving. Consider an instance of India's former prime minister Manmohan Singh, a compliant leader, under who the tensions of borders with different countries including china, pakistan and bangladesh had significantly reduced. This is because of the sole reason of his cooperation and agreement for truce. While, cooperation might not have been a popular public opinion at the time, it did help to save many lives of soldiers. This is a typical reason why cooperative leaders have better 'control of the situation' while one's may have who prefer competing.
Secondly, the 'vision' of the organization or country is well on the right path if the leader is indifferent to competition. Competiton often leads to refraction from the path to which organization would have headed. This is because competion pushes the company to take actions that are an affectation for the company. This might include some malignant things. Take the case of OnePlus, the smart phone brand, had started as a phone for the community. Soon, after not able to provide enough profits from only the limited amount of phones it was producing, it started deviating from its path. They started launching phones every month, unlike they did every six months. Their predilection towards quantity over quality became apparent. This led to major backlash towards the company, and honest followers leaving for other products. This shows how competition's influence led to the decadation of the vision.
Although there are instances where companies competition can make leaders push to create a better product (or policies in case of government). This has often been observed in different situations. Quality of the product (or incentives) have significantly increased. Consider, the case of BSNL, who had been a local network provider in India since independence, the rise of companies in the early 2000s, led this company to significantly decrease their charges for the services it had provided. The company's CEO claimed to have an aim of providing landline to every household at a cheaper rate. This is a typical case of how a monopoly incentivizes it's exisiting customers to prevent them from leaving for the competition. This depicts how leadership reacts to competition, might help the consumers with better stance than before.
In conclusion, there is no clear comparision of which quality holds higher weight in terms of leadership. However, there are instances that cooperativer leader finds himself in an overall better situation rather a contending leader.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, as for, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 12.9106741573 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2629.0 2235.4752809 118% => OK
No of words: 493.0 442.535393258 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33265720081 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71206996034 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85894559909 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 215.323595506 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53752535497 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 815.4 704.065955056 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.844299934 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6551724138 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.10344827586 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11859895543 0.243740707755 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0334799652335 0.0831039109588 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323279102422 0.0758088955206 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.071580712126 0.150359130593 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180154201975 0.0667264976115 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 100.480337079 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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