"Simplicity and complexity" are the two sides of the coins. It depends on single individual to choose which side of the coin and take the things accordingly. I agree with the speaker as it requires real effort and courage to move in the opposite direction and make things as simple as posssible. The illustration of the points are explained in following paragraphs.
To begin with, lets talk about today`s high-tech digital world. People are becoming so dependent in these high tech gadgets that they can`t stay away from it even for some minutes. They have been like a drugs to them in which they are addicted towards. We can say that in a way this has made our life so easier but can we see the impact it has created in our daily lives?Once they have been habituated to them, it has become really hard to get rid of it. People have to be dependent on them. As we can consider one example of a businessman. He is too busy in conversation with the clients either in a call or in anyway. It`s his job. And unwillingly, he has to answers to the calls and give responses to client if he is on a leave too or in any vacations. Hasn`t this made his life complicated? and it take a lot courage form him to come out of that zone. So, this can be the case.
Secondly, lets suppose there has been a row between two neighbour. And both of them are blaming each other over some nonsensical issues and making the situations so convoluted that it has become arduous to come out of it. If anyone of them had brought the real effort and courage to ameliorate the current situation then the row would be over by now. Both of them are just involved in making the things tortuitous.
On the contrary, every time the case isn`t the same. Sometimes it requires real courage and efforts to make the complicated things. Let`s consider today`s world at the height of high technology and innovations. To come to this stage, no doubt it required great effort of the engineers, developers, scientist, enterpreneurs etc and they don`t come from a simple things or simple imaginations.
In sum, we can say that, it`s in our hand whether to complicate or simplify the things that come across on our way of daily activities. The same thing can be simple for someone and can be complicated for the other one. Therefore, to have courage in dealing to any situations is must in every individual.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, anyway, but, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, as to, no doubt, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2001.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 429.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66433566434 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82691292592 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501165501166 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.4810893939 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1111111111 118.986275619 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8888888889 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.59259259259 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 4.83258426966 331% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233449880775 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638005603847 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967395163551 0.0758088955206 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159915775987 0.150359130593 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829121845254 0.0667264976115 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 14.1392134831 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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