The real talent of a popular musician cannot accurately be assessed until the musician has been dead for several generations, so that his or her fame does not interfere with honest assessment.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
At first it seems logical that musician's popularity interfere with the correct assessment of his/her talent.But after giving it some thought it can be said that popularity is one of the factors in determining the talent of the musician.Popularity of musician increases when he/she is producing great music and people are liking it.
Saying that people get influenced by the popularity is not totally true.
while some people may get influenced by this factor but there are always people who know music. They know how good the musician is.
People may get influenced by the popularity and listen to some music and some times enjoy it because of the popularity that but if musician is not good then people will get fed up. They will stop listening. And obviously popularity will drop.
When a particular musician is popular because of reasons other than music then it is quite possible that some time people get influenced by his/her popularity and think that that musician is good but until they listen to him. After listening it depends to the quality of music if people like it or not.
We can not say they that musician cannot be judged before he is long dead.It is possible to assess the talent of a musician even when he is alive. May be not when he is on his peak.Then it is quite possible that people are just following the trend and liking it. But when the musician remains in business for a prolonged time, judging the talent become easier.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'musicians'' or 'musician's'?
Suggestion: musicians'; musician's
At first it seems logical that musicians popularity interfere with the correct a...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...he correct assessment of his/her talent.But after giving it some thought it can be ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Popularity
... determining the talent of the musician.Popularity of musician increases when he/she is p...
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Line 1, column 250, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the talent of the musician.Popularity of musician increases when he/she is produc...
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Line 1, column 319, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...she is producing great music and people are liking it. Saying that people get influenced ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...by the popularity is not totally true. while some people may get influenced by this ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...han music then it is quite possible that some time people get influenced by his/h...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...cannot be judged before he is long dead.It is possible to assess the talent of a m...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Then
...live. May be not when he is on his peak.Then it is quite possible that people are ju...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.182835820896 0.240241500013 76% => OK
Verbs: 0.205223880597 0.157235817809 131% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0783582089552 0.0880659088768 89% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0634328358209 0.0497285424764 128% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0746268656716 0.0444667217837 168% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.130597014925 0.12292977631 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0559701492537 0.0406280797675 138% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.56935540616 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0149253731343 0.030933414821 48% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00373134328358 0.0016655270985 224% => OK
Determiners: 0.089552238806 0.0997080785238 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0298507462687 0.0249443105267 120% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0298507462687 0.0148568991511 201% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1450.0 2732.02544248 53% => OK
No of words: 254.0 452.878318584 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70866141732 6.0361032391 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.58838876751 87% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.326771653543 0.366273622748 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.216535433071 0.280924506359 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.149606299213 0.200843997647 74% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.102362204724 0.132149295362 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56935540616 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 219.290929204 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472440944882 0.48968727796 96% => OK
Word variations: 43.6014268308 55.4138127331 79% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6194690265 58% => OK
Sentence length: 21.1666666667 23.380412469 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.287793652 59.4972553346 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.833333333 141.124799967 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 23.380412469 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.583333333333 0.674092028746 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.21349557522 173% => OK
Readability: 42.8202099738 51.4728631049 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.07608695652 1.64882698954 65% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264775635325 0.391690518653 68% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.158197489847 0.123202303941 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0744198658358 0.077325440228 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.675169773671 0.547984918172 123% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.235523198159 0.149214159877 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122894943463 0.161403998019 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840711300308 0.0892212321368 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.32818133612 0.385218514788 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.10565866654 0.0692045440612 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165325474258 0.275328986314 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725078390187 0.0653680567796 111% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 13.5995575221 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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