The real talent of a popular musician cannot accurately be assessed until the musician has been dead for several generations, so that his or her fame does not interfere with honest assessment
To assess the real talent of a popular musician there is no need of a musician to be alive of dead the most important thing which is needed for assessment is the existence of a music composed by a musician.
There are many musicians who have made history by creating breakthrough musics of all time.Such as the prominent example would be of a Micheal Jackson. He created hip-hop style music which got quite popular at that time and is even popular today.It was the first time this kind of music was introduced to the world, as there was no any prerequisite to judge the music and talent of the creator as it was completely new, the assessment of his talent was dependent on the acceptance of the music of by the public. So, whether the musician is alive or not does not matter neither his/her popularity but the acceptance of the music and the unbiased nature of the people who are assessing it.
Adding, the musician A. R. Rehman known as Mozart of Madras who is also a Oscar winner which in itself is the assessment perk to judge the talent of the musician.Moreover, the music is an art and to assess the music or any form of art the more important thing to see the creativity in it. Therefore, the right element for the assessment of talent of a musician is his ability to create the music in a creative way.
Moreover, there are many different music s have evolved over the period of time such as classical music, rap music , rock music ,EDM etc. These are all different forms of music and different people have created histories in all different musical forms. Some people like one kind of music and some like something other. So, to assess the musician's talent the person who is going to judge should be unbiased and having knowledge of that particular music type.
However, if the talent of a musician is to be assessed by the popularity or by doing survey of whether the music is liked by how many people then it will be a wrong element to depend on.
Concluding, popularity will not hamper the assessment of the talent of the musician until and unless it is the criteria considered.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 379.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54617414248 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58282603067 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440633245383 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.9 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.4943276786 60.3974514979 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.538461538 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1538461538 23.4991977007 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.21951772744 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288501091813 0.243740707755 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150346765242 0.0831039109588 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111426437441 0.0758088955206 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214593480905 0.150359130593 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0920185870879 0.0667264976115 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.8971910112 147% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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