The real talent of a popular musician cannot accurately be assessed until the musician has been dead for several generations, so that his or her fame does not interfere with an honest assessment.
We know that music is a piece of art.It can be subjective as well as common to all. Music is one of the form of art that is eternal. It is there to stay for a long time.It lives on ,even after the artist has passed away.However, I mostly disagree with the claim that an accurate assessment of a famous musician can only be assessed posthumously. If a musician is popular during their lifetime then it is safe to understand that their music has struck a chord with the listeners and it is here to stay.
A musician's popularity is the result of the acceptance of their art.If people relate to their music then it automatically disseminates amongst the masses.Even though music can be subjective,The fact that the musician is popular conveys that it resonates with the listeners. Once this happens that piece of music is here to stay for eternity.It doesn't need several decades after the musician has died to asses its poularity. Freddie Mercury is a great example to refute this claim.During the peak of his career, he amassed great love and popularity from his fans.He was at the zenith of his career and eternalized the songs like Bohemian Rhapsody. In that era he did have a thriving fan following.His songs didn't need decades to reach the listeners and become popular.
A musician's popularity can truly be assessed when they continuously produce quality work. Releasing a single music piece wont help them to maintain the longevity of their popularity. Popularity can be ephemeral. Hence only consistency along with novelty will help them be in the listener's good books.If the quality of their music is not good then their career might not sustain in the present.And surely not for the foreseeable future.Hence the claim that the artist only can be judged generations after their death is a bold one. Imagine in today's world of 30 seconds of fame via Instagram Reels and TikTok,A musicians work gains popularity. Their music is catchy and is used abundant times in such videos. But this popularity/fame is short-lived.Tomorrow a new song will catch the ears of listeners and a new trend will start with it.The previous song that gained popularity will fall into abyss.
However, it is true that some musicians truly live on through generations via their music. Their music is relevant and really priceless to get lost through the decades. This was exemplified by The Late Lata Mangeshkar. Her melodious voice has struck a chord for generations and will continue to do so.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, really, second, so, then, well, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.6327345309 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 28.8173652695 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 55.5748502994 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 16.3942115768 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2061.0 2260.96107784 91% => OK
No of words: 422.0 441.139720559 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88388625592 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86099047594 2.78398813304 103% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 204.123752495 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514218009479 0.468620217663 110% => OK
syllable_count: 657.0 705.55239521 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 4.96107784431 282% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.1708477659 57.8364921388 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.473684211 119.503703932 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2105263158 23.324526521 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15789473684 5.70786347227 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 5.25449101796 495% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.20758483034 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241641341404 0.218282227539 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752665300891 0.0743258471296 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671567694739 0.0701772020484 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156459204806 0.128457276422 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321914305071 0.0628817314937 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.3799401198 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.3550499002 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.197005988 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.5979740519 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 98.500998004 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.