The real talent of a popular musician cannot accurately be assessed until the musician has been dead for several generations, so that his or her fame does not interfere with honest assessment.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Music has been a vitial part of any culture or civiliszation. Music is of different forms and tones, it can be in the form of tribal, classical, pop culture, R&B, Rap, etc. each of which have unique features defining them. The prompt posists that the real talent of a musician cannot be assessend until has been dead for several year, so the fame does not interfere with the honest assessement. While the talent of the musician can be assessed even after several years of his death, I believe the his works can be assessed while he is in exisitence, witout the intereference of fame. I disagree with the statement due to the following reasons.
Firstly, fame is a intangible and many a times, temporary craze for the music or the musician. One owns fame and popularity, if he has done something that takes the world to an awe. For instance, consider One Direction, the boy band who got famous after the awe inspiring performance on the world stage. They were being assessed of their abilities and talent, which made them famous. They have been split at least a decade ago and yet they remain famous and popular among every generation today. This proves the point that the assement of their talent was accurately done and was given the fame they deserve even when they were in the market and when they have left the market.
Second, it is imperative to note that fame has nothing to do with assessment of a music. A real song or a musical can be judged based on various parameters, like the lyrics, the tone of the song, the vocals, instruments used and so on. For instance, consider the songs written by Ed Sheeran. It cannot be denyed that he has a huge fan base all over the world. His 'perfect' has got his many fans across countries and the song is still divine. However, not all his songs today have the same fame or craze among his fans. This proves that not all the songs released by famous artis are a hit. They are in fact judged based on the genere, tone, lyrics, etc.
However, there might be situations, where fame overrides the quality of music being produced, as in case of pop artists like Taylor Swift or rap artists like Travis Scott or Kanye west. They have millions of fans across of the world. Any album they produce is a hit, even if it not appealing. They have gained reputation among their fans amd so their fans are blined by their music. Their accurate assessment might be done after they either stop producing the music or after no longer exisit.
Therefore, while the statement might hold true in few cases where the artist is extremely popular or has blinded the fans with his talent before, but in most of the cases, fame shall not interefer with the assessemnt of the talent. Fame is in fact the measure of the talent of the musician for his previous works. To judge the future works, his lyrical composition, and other features of the song maybe tested.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 322, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun year seems to be countable; consider using: 'several years'.
Suggestion: several years
...ot be assessend until has been dead for several year, so the fame does not interfere with th...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 494, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'his'?
Suggestion: the; his
...r several years of his death, I believe the his works can be assessed while he is in ex...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 18, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...he following reasons. Firstly, fame is a intangible and many a times, temporary ...
^
Line 2, column 40, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a time' or simply 'times'?
Suggestion: a time; times
... Firstly, fame is a intangible and many a times, temporary craze for the music or the m...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 608, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to even'
Suggestion: to even
...one and was given the fame they deserve even when they were in the market and when t...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, so, still, therefore, while, at least, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2367.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 520.0 442.535393258 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55192307692 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77530192783 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33835320473 2.79657885939 84% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482692307692 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 760.5 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.0134308378 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5357142857 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82142857143 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284324548112 0.243740707755 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740552571202 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879093763629 0.0758088955206 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166364678352 0.150359130593 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100735705128 0.0667264976115 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 12.1639044944 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 322, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun year seems to be countable; consider using: 'several years'.
Suggestion: several years
...ot be assessend until has been dead for several year, so the fame does not interfere with th...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 494, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'his'?
Suggestion: the; his
...r several years of his death, I believe the his works can be assessed while he is in ex...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 18, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...he following reasons. Firstly, fame is a intangible and many a times, temporary ...
^
Line 2, column 40, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a time' or simply 'times'?
Suggestion: a time; times
... Firstly, fame is a intangible and many a times, temporary craze for the music or the m...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 608, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to even'
Suggestion: to even
...one and was given the fame they deserve even when they were in the market and when t...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, so, still, therefore, while, at least, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2367.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 520.0 442.535393258 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55192307692 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77530192783 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33835320473 2.79657885939 84% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482692307692 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 760.5 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.0134308378 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5357142857 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82142857143 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284324548112 0.243740707755 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740552571202 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879093763629 0.0758088955206 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166364678352 0.150359130593 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100735705128 0.0667264976115 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 12.1639044944 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.