The real talent of a popular musician cannot accurately be assessed until the musician has been dead for several generations, so that his or her fame does not interfere with honest assessments
Different musicians have been been brought to lime light over generations, and many are still developing and much will still be bring to fame in the incomming years. The prompt suggests that to assessed these mucians accurately, the assessments needs to be done after there death, so that his or her fame does not interfere with the honest assessment. In my own reasoning i will mostly agree with the prompt in two reasons.
Firstly, each musicians have some set of mob, that are die hard fans of the musicians, and the love of the artist will keep increasing in therre heart the more the musician is realeasing new songs or albulm. The love and vibes, the fans are getting from the artist will hinder them from assessing the artist honestly and if they forced to do so it may inventually affect the love which will later alter the artist fame. For example, Micheal jackson, one of the greatest artist of of our time used his fame for more than 3 decades and during his life time people were not even in plan to assess him not to talk of assessing him. But after his death, alot of critisism came up and different assessments were carried out which makes some set of people to hate him. His religion beleive brings about some controversies and if this has been during his life time it affect his fame. so assesing him after death save him that falling during his life time.
Also, to criticize a musciam will not neccessarily affect there fame al time. some can even galvernized the fame, making there fame balooned exponcially. For instance a nigerian rapper in the late 70's Barrack ogrin was assessed based on his lifestyle. people criticize him that he vaolate the music copyright of his competitor. meanwhile, the allegation is not true. After the inestigation and he was found to be false allegation. people now loves him more and he gainned the affection of more fans. his next music albulm titled "allegation" sales ten times his previous albums he has been selling. This implies that if we are to assess a musician that has positive attitudes then the assessments will be of a positive omen to bis fame, but if the assessment later result in other side the musician fame is at stake and this is very bad ffor anyone.
In conclusion, assessing an artist in there lifetime is not bad, its all just depends on the character of the artist.
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- The real talent of a popular musician cannot accurately be assessed until the musician has been dead for several generations so that his or her fame does not interfere with honest assessments 58
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- The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones 62
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: been
Different musicians have been been brought to lime light over generations,...
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Line 1, column 373, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... honest assessment. In my own reasoning i will mostly agree with the prompt in tw...
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Line 2, column 477, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: of
...eal jackson, one of the greatest artist of of our time used his fame for more than 3 ...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 545, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
... for more than 3 decades and during his life time people were not even in plan to assess ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 847, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...versies and if this has been during his life time it affect his fame. so assesing him aft...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 860, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'affects'?
Suggestion: affects
...f this has been during his life time it affect his fame. so assesing him after death s...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 877, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...uring his life time it affect his fame. so assesing him after death save him that ...
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Line 2, column 938, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
... death save him that falling during his life time. Also, to criticize a musciam will n...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 79, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...neccessarily affect there fame al time. some can even galvernized the fame, making t...
^^^^
Line 4, column 253, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...in was assessed based on his lifestyle. people criticize him that he vaolate the music...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 329, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Meanwhile
... the music copyright of his competitor. meanwhile, the allegation is not true. After the ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 432, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...nd he was found to be false allegation. people now loves him more and he gainned the a...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 501, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: His
... he gainned the affection of more fans. his next music albulm titled 'allegati...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, honestly, if, may, so, still, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1945.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 416.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67548076923 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59365865669 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521634615385 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9968438401 60.3974514979 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.368421053 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8947368421 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78947368421 5.21951772744 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316423475313 0.243740707755 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907579210154 0.0831039109588 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825267528261 0.0758088955206 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194322719679 0.150359130593 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.092566192044 0.0667264976115 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: been
Different musicians have been been brought to lime light over generations,...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 373, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... honest assessment. In my own reasoning i will mostly agree with the prompt in tw...
^
Line 2, column 477, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: of
...eal jackson, one of the greatest artist of of our time used his fame for more than 3 ...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 545, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
... for more than 3 decades and during his life time people were not even in plan to assess ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 847, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...versies and if this has been during his life time it affect his fame. so assesing him aft...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 860, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'affects'?
Suggestion: affects
...f this has been during his life time it affect his fame. so assesing him after death s...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 877, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...uring his life time it affect his fame. so assesing him after death save him that ...
^^
Line 2, column 938, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
... death save him that falling during his life time. Also, to criticize a musciam will n...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 79, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...neccessarily affect there fame al time. some can even galvernized the fame, making t...
^^^^
Line 4, column 253, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...in was assessed based on his lifestyle. people criticize him that he vaolate the music...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 329, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Meanwhile
... the music copyright of his competitor. meanwhile, the allegation is not true. After the ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 432, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...nd he was found to be false allegation. people now loves him more and he gainned the a...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 501, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: His
... he gainned the affection of more fans. his next music albulm titled 'allegati...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, honestly, if, may, so, still, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1945.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 416.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67548076923 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59365865669 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521634615385 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9968438401 60.3974514979 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.368421053 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8947368421 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78947368421 5.21951772744 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316423475313 0.243740707755 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907579210154 0.0831039109588 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825267528261 0.0758088955206 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194322719679 0.150359130593 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.092566192044 0.0667264976115 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.