The topic at hand implies/suggests that speaker or reformer are not useful to focus our attention on problems rather scandals are important to focus on problems.Many people may believe that scandals are useful to focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.However, in my opinion to focus our attention on problems we do no need scandals.
To begin, Problem are a part of life and we all have to face problem in our day-to-day life.If any problem occur in our society as well in our country we do not need scandals to focus the atttention of people on problem.Now a days people are very attentive towards any problem.They have laptops,personal computers, mobiles through which they get to know about any problems.
In addition,Speakers and reformers are important part of society and they are responsible to bring any social change which is useful for the society as well as country.For examole, India is being slaved by britishers for more than 200 years of age and indian people are getting sick due to the british monarchy. In that time reformers like Mahatma Gandhi like leaders bring a freedom to indian to people without doing any type of scandals and become success to make india free from britishers rule.
Also,Sometimes scandals are false or false and which lead to major serious problems in the sociaty. For example, few yaers ago some people created a hoax that facebook is now charge for make account on ther site which created a lot of problem but after some timewhen fb official says that it is this information is vague.
To sum up, the reasons and examples mentioned above substantiated my view that scandals are useful but stating hat scandals are necessary to focus the attention of problem that no speaker or reformer are not correct.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Now
...cus the atttention of people on problem.Now a days people are very attentive toward...
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...ve towards any problem.They have laptops,personal computers, mobiles through which they g...
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...eful for the society as well as country.For examole, India is being slaved by briti...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'freedom'.
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... like Mahatma Gandhi like leaders bring a freedom to indian to people without doing any t...
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...india free from britishers rule. Also,Sometimes scandals are false or false and which l...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of problems'.
Suggestion: a lot of problems
...make account on ther site which created a lot of problem but after some timewhen fb official say...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, well, for example, in addition, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 305.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90819672131 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85361574436 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504918032787 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 23.0359550562 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.6820673494 60.3974514979 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 213.857142857 118.986275619 180% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.5714285714 23.4991977007 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.4285714286 5.21951772744 276% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302814832042 0.243740707755 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137745648627 0.0831039109588 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0961770938603 0.0758088955206 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172594194438 0.150359130593 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908146010259 0.0667264976115 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.5 14.1392134831 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 48.8420337079 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 12.1743820225 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.09 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 100.480337079 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 11.8971910112 227% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 11.2143820225 171% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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