As it is mentioned Scandals are useful to bring things into the focus in ways which no speaker or reformer ever could. I agree to the author’s statement to some extent. I support the original idea of a scandal. What is the meaning of scandal? Scandals bring a side of the story which all the parties are trying to hide from the public. A side which everyone is being evasive and are wary to talk about. Scandals brings that truth in light in turns helping the public to judge more fairly.
This brings me to the first definition of Scandal, an act which, done by a person with authority/power, is immoral and wrong. The journalists from Media outlets, Regular people who reports these wrongdoings with proof are trying to bring a new information for the people to consider. If used in a correct way scandals are a boon to the country’s social system. Its something which keeps the officials, celebrities, public figures in check and wary of anything immoral. It keeps their moral compass straight. For example, the first sting operation which happened in India leaked the footage of high government official taking large sum of bribes to pass a government tender. That was a start of a revolution which got attention of every person and everyone wanted the wrong doing corrected. This is a kind of affect a series of change which a scandal can bring to the society/ Country.
On the other hand, the scandals in the wrong hand is just a tool for playing with the thoughts of people, clouding the judgement of the viewers/ Readers. That brings me to the second definition of the scandal, A gossip or a Rumor. Nowadays we can see scandals coming out left and right, Scandals about government official taking bribes, saying something disheartening, celebrities’ scandals, even scandals of the regular joe saying something bad about someone. Are these all justify to e called scandals.
How convenient is it that suddenly out of nowhere a scandal about a politician’s past or something he said to a confidant coming out right now when he is trying to compete for an office? A scandal of a celebrity coming about his/her sex life or a affair with another person right at the moment when a new big movie coming out for the celebrity. These examples point to one direction that how media or people using the media trying artifice minds of people. It does not matter to them if the scandal information is true or not but now, they have biased the opinion of the people for/against the person in light. The real meaning of scandal to bring out something which will help to make the life of people better seems to be lost.
So many scandals popping up everyday makes you wonder if so, many things are wrong then as the scandals comes out there must be something done to compensate for the inconvenience people had, but no changes are made once the heat of the scandals cools off there is another scandal. Media outlets are so eagerly looking for scandals and sensationalize the news that no body cares to follow up on those scandals and what happened once it was reported. There is blame also goes to the viewers like us who are looking for something trendy something people enjoy talking about and that’s what media is utilizing.
I believe the scandals are good like I have mentioned a boon to the good of the society and the citizens. This helps people to feel empowered that they are the ones for which everyone works not the other way around, but lately it has become a sore to the society and we are enjoying it. We have given up the power and enjoying the sour fruit.
- Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed. 50
- Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could. 50
- To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In deve 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a correct way" with adverb for "correct"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ion for the people to consider. If used in a correct way scandals are a boon to the country&apos...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ebrity coming about his/her sex life or a affair with another person right at the...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'scandals'' or 'scandal's'?
Suggestion: scandals'; scandal's
...f so, many things are wrong then as the scandals comes out there must be something done ...
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Message: Did you mean 'nobody'?
Suggestion: nobody
...andals and sensationalize the news that no body cares to follow up on those scandals an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, second, so, then, for example, kind of, talking about, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.6327345309 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.9520958084 39% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 11.1786427146 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 13.6137724551 162% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 28.8173652695 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 89.0 55.5748502994 160% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2961.0 2260.96107784 131% => OK
No of words: 633.0 441.139720559 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67772511848 5.12650576532 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.01592376844 4.56307096286 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63337806129 2.78398813304 95% => OK
Unique words: 300.0 204.123752495 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473933649289 0.468620217663 101% => OK
syllable_count: 919.8 705.55239521 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 4.96107784431 282% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 19.7664670659 152% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6138398522 57.8364921388 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7 119.503703932 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1 23.324526521 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.70786347227 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.20758483034 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 6.88822355289 232% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189348527105 0.218282227539 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550141584323 0.0743258471296 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867087735038 0.0701772020484 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10502252369 0.128457276422 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636680486364 0.0628817314937 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.3799401198 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.3550499002 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.5979740519 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.32208582834 92% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 98.500998004 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 12.3882235529 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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