Scandals when we hear this word, it always remind us about the negative sides of any subject as it is of politiical talks or about any luminaries life. So,we cannot deny the fact that scandals drive our focus on problems in a way more that speaker or reformers ever could.
In evey part of world scandals have played huge role in any type of problems be it positive or negative. Also, scandals are more attractive to peoples on any topic that on any speaker talking on same topic. For example, when newspaper publiced their atricle on certain topic with perspective of any speaker draws less attention of readers. But if same topic is publiced with spicy scandals headline then it is probab;e that reader would focus on that topic.
So, when reader and viewers gives attention to problems it becomes hot issue and their is high probablity that can be solved as soon as possible and comes out a fact news which would be either analogous to the scandal or could have different face of problems than scandals have revealed. As an example, during my high school days my best friend lost her pencil box and there was a slient, introvert and laconic boy in class who did not have much friends. And my friend thought he was the one who stole her pencil box and spread a rumor all over school that he is thief but when teacher investigate on this topic then found out that thief was actually the girl who used to sit next to us.
Even though scandals are able to persuade viewers or readers attention, it always does not have positive impact on society and problems it self. Sometimes, scandals are made on false fact and belies the truth which cannot to revealed. Last year there was a scandal about a serial actress fair with married director and she killed his wife for him. This scandal terminate the actress professional life and had a very bad reputation which leads her to attempt sucide. When later ccase was studies it was the director who killed his wife not actress.
So, scandals are better to drag public attention to real problems but it is not always best idea to judges the case
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'reminds'?
Suggestion: reminds
...ndals when we hear this word, it always remind us about the negative sides of any subj...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'luminaries'' or 'luminary's'?
Suggestion: luminaries'; luminary's
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , we
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Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...on to problems it becomes hot issue and their is high probablity that can be solved a...
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...d laconic boy in class who did not have much friends. And my friend thought he was t...
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Message: Did you mean 'itself'?
Suggestion: itself
...positive impact on society and problems it self. Sometimes, scandals are made on false ...
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'terminates'.
Suggestion: terminates
...e killed his wife for him. This scandal terminate the actress professional life and had a...
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tion which leads her to attempt sucide. When later ccase was studies it was the dire...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'always the best'.
Suggestion: always the best
...ttention to real problems but it is not always best idea to judges the case
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 375.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.576 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26075464294 2.79657885939 81% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525333333333 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3214986869 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.4 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.06666666667 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 5.13820224719 253% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17948547295 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677497218864 0.0831039109588 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622511333823 0.0758088955206 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103004342773 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027220771092 0.0667264976115 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 48.8420337079 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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