The author asserts that a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college and I agree with the author. The national curriculum until the student enters college should be the same throughout the country and world so that there would be fair competition.
If the student all the students are allowed to study the same national curriculum then a student of every part of the world would have some basic knowledge and there will not be any biased knowledge between students and there could be fair competition. For example, we can see that after completion of high school students have to join the university and to enter into universities they have to pass entrance exams conducted by universities. Therefore, if students not required to study the same curriculum this entrance exam would not be able to judge the student's capacity.
Also, the same national curriculum for students would be helpful for every student's future professional life. If a person has basic knowledge about every field then it is always beneficial for once a career. As an example, a Business student appearing a GMAT test and a scientific passage appears in this test then for him his basic knowledge about science which he learned during his high school would help him. It is not certain in one's life about what is coming next ahead so, it is always beneficial for everyone to have basic knowledge about every field which can be gained from the same national curriculum until students enter college.
However, it is not always possible to have every curriculum similar throughout the country. Students may feel monotonous and bored to involve in the subject they are not interested in. And which leads them to drop their education and pursue their future in illiteracy which indirectly harms the nation's development. Thus, governments should compulsory only certain curriculum be the same throughout the nation but let the student to choose their remaining course as they want or interested.
In a conclusion, I agree with the statement that the same nation curriculum should be established for the student until they enter school but a student should also have a certain degree of freedom to choose their elective course which will enhance them even more for their future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 557, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...nce exam would not be able to judge the students capacity. Also, the same national curr...
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Line 3, column 434, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ol would help him. It is not certain in ones life about what is coming next ahead so...
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Line 4, column 295, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...n illiteracy which indirectly harms the nations development. Thus, governments should c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1925.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 384.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01302083333 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59756324238 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4453125 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 609.3 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6083942584 60.3974514979 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.5 118.986275619 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4285714286 23.4991977007 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.475289699466 0.243740707755 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193978911209 0.0831039109588 233% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.163822209042 0.0758088955206 216% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.31962713162 0.150359130593 213% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155366895488 0.0667264976115 233% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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