Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could
it is shocking how many scandals people see or hear every day through all kinds of mediums. In fact it is not uncommon that different groups or individuals ask for attention but they do not get it when needed. In my opinion I agree with the suggestion that people put more attention and listen better through scandals because the solution of the problem might be more attainable and one scandal can cover up another one.
First, people know that behind a scandal is an older problem and needs attention. For example, the government of England is failing to stop the massive emigration that is taking place from some countries to their country. During this time the government has tried many ways, from laws approved against illegal emigration and speeches that unmask the criminality those emigrants cause when they come. there was no success to be seen until a scandal revealed that minor emigrants are being frequently go missing. it was said that the minors were possibly used for tasks that go against the law. people reacted because this was very serious and the massive intake of emigrants diminished. revealing the scandal stopped the widespread of the problem.
Second, a scandal can be revealed in order to take the attention of the masses from another scandal that a group or government is not keen to let go. For instance, corrupted governments face many media attacks and have to come up with another ‘hot’ issue to remove the attention somewhere else. this helps people get more informed and know how to react toward it. In addition, both parties on a scandal that is present get to take action their own way. one side gets informed and the other tries to clean the bad reputation.
The scandal reveal might be not true and a solution may not be found. In fact, new problems might outgrow that people were not aware. For example, a few decades ago fictive scandals were thrown around about UFO-s and that was time and energy consuming for a lot. they may remain a mystery and that opens up chances for abuse of information. These problems require people to know how to take the best out of everything.
In summary, there is no need to fear scandals, because they open our eyes. people put more attention and listen better through them. scandals come up and usually they signal a problem, but sometimes they are used to cover another one which is more serious.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, in summary, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1980.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 413.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79418886199 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39769112343 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518159806295 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8296466987 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0869565217 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9565217391 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.65217391304 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 18.0 5.13820224719 350% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225049027315 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677872172992 0.0831039109588 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547864330433 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144406712877 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685570824084 0.0667264976115 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.