Scandals are ubiquitous in the world. They effect a large number of people and hence, learning about them is useful as it can turn our attention to problems that seem unprecedented.
People involved in a scandal engage in treacherous activities for materialistic gains. For example, in India many scams are uncovered every year and most of these scams are done by politicians, who are supposed to be stalwarts in their goal to serve people in the nation. These venal politicians who pledged to serve the people of the nation and strive for its development, dupe money from citizens in the name of taxes and use it for their own development rather than for the development of the nation. Scandals are useful to the citizens as they can learn the true motives of their leaders through such scandals and hence, will be wary when they have to choose the next leader.
Most people just make some impetuous decisions and sometimes they may to face heavy repercussions. For instance, take the recent surge in scam companies, many people create fabricated companies to take money from innocent people. For example, a recent news surfaced about a real estate company selling disputed lands to the people who were ignorant about this discrepancy, by the time the people who bought these lands learnt about this malpractice, the company evanesced. These sort of scams can open our minds to the extent to which some people can go, in order to dupe hard earned money from innocent people and hence, information about such scandals can be used to admonish people about impetuous decision making.
In spite of many such scandals being exposed in the media, some people still fall prey to such fleecing scam artists, this is clearly a case of unawareness. Scandals are only useful if the extent of their depravity makes an impact on people to make smart and scrupulous decisions. In order, for people to fathom the full extent of a scandal, they should properly be furnished with information such as the adverse effects on people due to scandals and how people are fooled. This sort of extensive information can make scandals useful by educating people to be more wary.
Hence, scandals are useful as they can inform people about the untenable problems, that otherwise cannot be addressed without them taking place.
- Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could 50
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...re ubiquitous in the world. They effect a large number of people and hence, learning about them i...
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Line 3, column 474, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this sort' or 'These nulls'?
Suggestion: This sort; These nulls
...his malpractice, the company evanesced. These sort of scams can open our minds to the exte...
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Line 5, column 145, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...be addressed without them taking place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, so, still, for example, for instance, sort of, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1916.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 388.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9381443299 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56229642125 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489690721649 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3534822345 60.3974514979 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.733333333 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8666666667 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 5.21951772744 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131089799536 0.243740707755 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643617345505 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533538740983 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110827432829 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596980221463 0.0667264976115 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.