Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position.
we can say that scandals are the form of booster for any big personalities in the society.they show the unknown side of the individual which others or the people see.one person may be offended by the type of scandals that arise but most of them help them to focus their individual attentions on the unknown problem that in general no speaker or the reformer ever could.So,scandals can be most useful for the famous persons in society to the problems that cannot be discussed wide open and that cannot be hidden inside.
Firstly,The scandals that comes out can focus our attentions on problems that no one could speak.For Example,if you are the big personality in the society ,the scandal which has come out is healthy then its only does more good and increase your status in society speaking through it.So,scandals can be treated with most common behaviour and intelligence to make them good to you.most of the people have the fear when they listen the word 'scandal' ,but they have to think this as a oppourtinity to assemble the problem that no one could ever speak of. And we can give the other side to it in the coming paragraph.
So,when it comes to the scandals with the negative side and you are the most worried person how it reflects your image in the soceity.For example, scandals such as negative news which is spreading,then the time you should react should be well thought of and act accordingly to the situation.most of the time,scandals can only do more than good to you in your formal and professional life.
Lastly,the issue which is about the scandals are useful because they can focus on the problems which cannot be discussed by any person and reformers.However, it does only good to you most situations and help in focusing the problems, And also increase your image as a person in the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, so, then, well, for example, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 316.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76898734177 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81504551526 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474683544304 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 63.0 23.0359550562 273% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 176.160835602 60.3974514979 292% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 301.4 118.986275619 253% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 63.2 23.4991977007 269% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.8 5.21951772744 437% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294589773961 0.243740707755 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164262504543 0.0831039109588 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904870903181 0.0758088955206 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20132497311 0.150359130593 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401098756206 0.0667264976115 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.6 14.1392134831 231% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 15.99 48.8420337079 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 12.1743820225 219% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.38706741573 113% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 100.480337079 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 11.8971910112 235% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.2 11.2143820225 243% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 11.7820224719 238% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.