As per the speaker, scandals help in bring attention to the mistakes and weakness of the society. He also believes that scandals are more help in identifying a societies problems than a speaker or reformer. I partially agree with speaker, scandals do help in pointing out the some societies problems but not all scandals do that. A scandal causes great loss in property so we should avoid it happening. A good speaker or a reformer can identify the issues of a society better than scandals.
The scandals help in bringing attention of all people to the problems of society as scandals tend to attract more people than a reformer or speaker. We can use this attention of people to impart knowledge or morals to people. Thereby using scandals as chance to look in to the problems of society. But not all scandals have that effect. For example, a scandal involving a politician are generally affect which may point to the problems of government. But a scandals that caused by film actors is limited to a few circles. So all scandals are not helpful.
In addition to that, scandal can be used as a tool to shift the attention from the real problem. For example a scandal involving a movie star gets more attention than water scarcity issue of society. So giving attention to scandals will cause more is loss of time and focus of the society. Further than that, some scandals may bring huge loss to in terms of money and property to the people. So scandals bring more loss than good. So we must avoid it by any cost.
A reformer or a speaker can be more useful to a society than scandals. They are doing it for single purpose of betterment of society. So the problems the bring to our attention is more important. Even if the problems they point to cannot attract less crowd reformers will be ready to work on those problems until it solves. So even though scandals bring out problems they cannot solve it. So reformers are more useful to society.
In short we can say, scandals do help in bringing attention. They are not that helpful when compared to reformer as scandals cannot solve the problems they point towards. Scandals can cause more loss than gain we must avoid scandals as much as we could.
- TPO-02 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 77
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- TPO-04 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 277, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...r, scandals do help in pointing out the some societies problems but not all scandals...
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Line 1, column 461, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a reformer can identify the issues of a society better than scandals. The sca...
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Line 3, column 398, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'affected'.
Suggestion: affected
...al involving a politician are generally affect which may point to the problems of gove...
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Line 3, column 456, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a scandal' or simply 'scandals'?
Suggestion: a scandal; scandals
...oint to the problems of government. But a scandals that caused by film actors is limited t...
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Line 7, column 151, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... betterment of society. So the problems the bring to our attention is more important. Eve...
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Line 7, column 325, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[5]
Message: “So even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...work on those problems until it solves. So even though scandals bring out problems they cannot solve it. So reformers are more useful to society...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eful to society. In short we can say, scandals do help in bringing attention. ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in short']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.257009345794 0.240241500013 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.147196261682 0.157235817809 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0584112149533 0.0880659088768 66% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0490654205607 0.0497285424764 99% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0443925233645 0.0444667217837 100% => OK
Prepositions: 0.133177570093 0.12292977631 108% => OK
Participles: 0.035046728972 0.0406280797675 86% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.48993705689 2.79330140395 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0467289719626 0.030933414821 151% => OK
Particles: 0.00467289719626 0.0016655270985 281% => OK
Determiners: 0.109813084112 0.0997080785238 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0397196261682 0.0249443105267 159% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00700934579439 0.0148568991511 47% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2207.0 2732.02544248 81% => OK
No of words: 392.0 452.878318584 87% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63010204082 6.0361032391 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.58838876751 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.326530612245 0.366273622748 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.270408163265 0.280924506359 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.214285714286 0.200843997647 107% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0663265306122 0.132149295362 50% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48993705689 2.79330140395 89% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 219.290929204 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.40306122449 0.48968727796 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 42.1550393517 55.4138127331 76% => OK
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6194690265 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.5185185185 23.380412469 62% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.016045092 59.4972553346 50% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7407407407 141.124799967 58% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5185185185 23.380412469 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.674092028746 49% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.21349557522 134% => OK
Readability: 41.559334845 51.4728631049 81% => OK
Elegance: 1.76699029126 1.64882698954 107% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284333991978 0.391690518653 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.113054130889 0.123202303941 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.118530511066 0.077325440228 153% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.480068853926 0.547984918172 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.133809425962 0.149214159877 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108324182087 0.161403998019 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645592070664 0.0892212321368 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.417988628126 0.385218514788 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.107740607468 0.0692045440612 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205026623387 0.275328986314 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554027648492 0.0653680567796 85% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.4325221239 29% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 22.0 5.30420353982 415% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 7.22455752212 42% => OK
Negative topic words: 21.0 3.66592920354 573% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 25.0 13.5995575221 184% => OK
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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